the raven and the eagle

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I'm going to explain what the ending was so if you'd rather leave it as it is, don't read this next part. Or want to keep it as it is until I start the short stories about Eagle and Raven.

Raven and Eagle are fictional. Even in their worlds. They were created by a little boy who was lonely.

He was born blind and had a hard time coping with the sense of loss. Eagle was made to compensate for his less than average build and muscle mass. Raven was created to balance Eagle out. Sort of like a parent kind of thing. They aren't romantically involved.

Plot-holes were intentional and were made to represent that keeping everything straight in only a person's mind is hard. The inconsistencies were like how he would think about them for a short period of time and then stop. Then pick up again.

This was never meant to be a full-on novel. Or be completed. I didn't even really expect people to look at it. So maybe some parts weren't as thought out.

In my mind this was my way of coping with something that happened to me recently. Of how it just all suddenly stopped. I apologize to those who thought this was going to go on.

The ending chapter wasn't written as well as it probably should've been. But I don't think I'll redo it. The sudden death of the boy is actually what happened to me. They were here and I saw them the evening before they died. The next morning I walked in and they were dead.

The whole book just was a place for me to create something I loved and then take it away from myself. A little masochistic maybe, but it helps.

If you have any questions about any events or scenery in the book please feel free to ask me. There was a reason behind everything.

Also this whole chapter is a mess. Ask anything you want clarified because I probably didn't do too good of a job.

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