Amazing Book Awards💜

❤Pack Of RESULTS❤

-and then they lived happily ever after.

Or did they?

I call upon Harm18Rma LPKnitsand knettle . Thank you so so so much

LPKnits your quick judgement made me publish the results before the last date of submission . Thank you❤❤

Hey participants,go and checkout their books,make them friends because they are the treasure you got from this awards!!!

Yo JessieZhu 0liviaRose436 Rikara_sk omlata18 Ahseya_aye almightycreator123 SnFusion Shandy2416 Unknownverse123 astropatche_moon jiyarani BookLover-04 starringastraea Confused_Soul_Kriya and starringastraea peeps out there!
Your books were amazing that I felt I should train how to get ideas for short stories from you all!!

Here are the results^_^

Scores in first round:

%The knock on the walls (https://my.w.tt/OfRoFYPglcb)
almightycreator123

Title: 5/5
Blurb: 3/5
Chapter: 10/10
Plot: 10/10
Grammar : 10/10
Writing skills: 10/10
Engagement: 9/10
Total = 57/60
Review: The story is short and sweet. The main idea of the story was well conveyed. Well written with rich vocabulary. Grammar was perfect. You've beautifully played with words making it sound apt and... perfect. Your book will do great once it comes into view. I'd suggest you to add more tags (important keywords of the story) that you think describes the story. And as for the story description, you can add a few more words into it, giving a reader reasons to click on "read".

%Living a lie (https://my.w.tt/hiy87sMglcb)
@astropatche_moon

Title : 5/5
Blurb : 2/5
First chapter: 10/10
Grammar : 9/10
Plot: 9/10
Writing skills: 5/10
Engagement: 10/10
Total = 50/60
Review: The one line blurb does not give much idea on what's inside the book. Maybe you can add an authors note below. It's poetry really. It's well written and relatable. Grammatical errors have been highlighted. At first sight it looked like the longest short story, until I started reading. To be honest, that's the reason I read it last. 30 parts for short story is too much content for the genre (that's what the reader thinks from outside). Most of the time after 2 parts the add interrupts, destroying the flow. And I believe most of the wattpadders don't have premium. I'd actually like to know the reason why each line is in each part before I recommend you to move all of 30 parts to 1 part.

%Why did she cry? (https://my.w.tt/EfhThaLglcb)
Unknownverse123

Title: 4/5
Blurb: 5/5
Chapter: 7/10
Plot: 9/10
Grammar: 8/10
Writing skills : 9/10
Engagement: 10/10
Total= 52/60
Review : To begin with title: I really didn't get the part with, 'and other short stories' when there is only one story. Specifying the birthday would make sense as to what impact it had on her. Was she too young? Or old enough to understand the gravity of the situation? The chapter needs a proof-reading for grammatical errors and punctuation. It's feel kinda strange that they lived in the same village but never met her grandmother. Instead you could add that they don't meet often. Or specify the various reasons as to why they never met. I think that would give more shape to the story. Think from grandmother's point of view: there are rumors of her daughter's death, and she hasn't tried to confirm? Give a thought to that.
You can divide the last para into 2-3 paragraphs. The story concept was great. The story had my full attention. I loved how it was thought provoking. The language is good, though you can edit it. You can add more tags (preferably with short words). I think that's all the things I could point out for the constructive feedback. These are from my point of view, but surely it's up to you what you do with it. In the end if I've hurt you with any comment, I'm sorry. (I have individually marked all these points in the story as comments, do refer for exact location).