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I present my review of Valerie_Lynn 's fantasy novel "Even Angels Fall from the Sky" to you!
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Cover:
It's a beautiful cover. The white and grey form a great contrast with the figure on the cover. The white used serves as the right representation of an angelic character. I also like your creativity in using the white behind her as wings instead of actual wings.
With the title, I think you can just shorten it to "Even Angels Fall". This will raise the question, "fall" in what sense? In love? In terms of glory? This is enough to draw readers in.
Blurb:
The nature of the character is revealed and her purpose seems obvious. I like how you show it is not so by making the understanding of perfection relative. The question the blurb ends with definitely gave me food for thought. I was also curious to find out what answer she'll be able decipher.
Plot:
Honestly, it was quite confusing at the beginning but eventually, things start to get clearer. One gets to know more about the characters through their thoughts, dialogue and occasional flashbacks.
I'm excited to find out how Maelyn and Milare's escape plan works out despite the threats which would certainly come their way. If they able to escape, that is.
Characters:
We get to view them beyond the established notions. The angels in the story, for instance, do have feelings and dark sides, although they try their very best to stifle it. Some, like Raziel unfortunately, let them take over.
The damned, like Maelyn, are also not as evil as one would think.
In a way, their personalities create the yin yang balance.
Grammar:
There were almost no typographical and grammatical errors.
I suggest you check your punctuations and capitalisation in certain chapters.
Generally,
I just think you should keep connecting the dots. Readers only like to be confused if they get to understand why later. If you keep justifying all the confusing parts of your novel and constantly bring readers out of the dark, it'll remain intriguing.
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