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Thanks so much for requesting "Gemicide: Amid the Blues of BcHaven" be reviewed LPKnits !

Thanks so much for requesting "Gemicide: Amid the Blues of BcHaven" be reviewed LPKnits !

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Cover:

It's bright colorful nature gives the reader the right idea of the magical, fantasy theme deeply rooted in the novel. It also instantly reveals some important characters, giving the reader a little glimpse Of who he or she is going to encounter within the novel. Your cover is pretty straightforward and inviting.

Blurb:

I was definitely intrigued as to what exactly wasn't going to end well. Also, who with these voices and what were they talking about? I love how do you let's these questions be raised on their our own through the use of dialogue. I actually wanted to find out the change in her life and how it was going to affect her in the long run.

Plot:

Now, everyone knows that when it comes to mystery novels especially, even a slight revelation can serve as a spoiler, so I'll just like to say that the confusion and suspense spun into a promising mystery right at the beginning was pretty impressive.

Characters:

It seems as though Ida has enough friends who will see her through the imminent trials she's going to face. I really want to see where her feelings with Dannon go!

Grammar:

A few corrections could be made to the punctuation, spacing and grammatical errors.

Generally,
Your novel has immense potential that can be reached with the necessary tweaks. Keep writing and good luck!

Thanks once again for requesting!
Look out for my last review soon❤️❤️🎉🎉!

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