Someone Special

Part 6

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I genuinely wanted to write a feel good love story on #ManVeer. 

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Later, Rajmata takes Manyata to meet some important guests. She meets some politicians, Mahasabha members. Just then, all youngsters come to meet Maharaj Prithvi Singh. First Jay and Unnati takes his blessings followed by Manyata, Vj and Uday. Manyata looks at Uday, briefly for a second which didn't go unnoticed by elders including Prithvi.

Maharaj Prithvi Singh: Are Waw Mrinalini! 12 saal ke baad milne per bhi Udayveer aur Manyata ke beech koi dooriyan nahi aayi. Humne dekha hai kitni pyare lag rahe the dance karte wakt. Achcha kiya aapne jo bachpan mein hi in ka roka karwa diya, warna bachchon ka koi pata nahi hota kab in ka man badal jaata hai. (Youngsters stand surprised except Uday and Manyata. Uday stands calm and Manyata stands shocked but composes as they are surrounded by important people of Mahasabha. After a while, when all the guests leave, Manyata comes down along with Jay in red eyes, indicating she cried.)

Jay: DS!! Jiji aap sab se kuch baat karna chahti hai. (Everyone stand calm.)

Manyata: Dadi Sa!! Aap ne hume itni badi baat batana zaroori nahi samjha. Kyun? (Komal tries to say something but Manyata gestures to stop by raising hand) Aap humari shaadi humari marzi jaane begair kaise karwa sakthi hai? Yeh kahan ki insaafi hai? (Rajmata stand calm, Manyata shouts) Kuch toh Boliye Dadi Sa? (Everyone stand shocked as Manyata never raises her voice. Jay and Unnati get scared of Manyata for the first time.)

Rajmata: (calmly) Beta! Aap pehle shant ho jayiye. Yeh faisla humne iss liye liya tha kyun ki aap dono bachpan mein bahut close the aur aap ke Dadu Sa aur Uday ke Dadu Sa ka dono ke yahi aakhiri khwaish thi ki Devgarh aur Jaigarh ke beech mein shaadi ka rishta lane chahiye. Aap ki Vasu Aunty bhi aap dono ki shaadi karwana chahti thi. Hum aap ko abhi ke abhi shaadi karne ke liye nahi keh rahe hai lekin aap iss baare mein zaroor Sochiye.

Brijraj: Haa Manyata beta.. Aap dono ko yahan koi force nahi kar rahe hai. Aap dono soch samajh discuss karke hume batayiye, theek hai. (Everyone leave and Manyata drives to highway.) 

(In Devgarh palace, everyone including Jaigarh family wait for Manyata's arrival.)

Jay: DS!! Aap ne Jiji ke saath sahi nahi kiya hai. Agar aap ne Jiji se pooch kar unki shaadi ki decision lete toh shayad aaj yeh haal nahi hota. Ab pata nahi kon si halat mein hai humari Jiji. Agar Jiji ko kuch hua toh hum aap ko kabhi maaf nahi karenge. Humari hi galati hai hume unhe akela nahi chodna chahiye tha. (sobs into Vj's chest)

Komal: Jay apne Dadi Sa ke faisla ke khilaaf aap aise kaise bol sakthi hai? Aap ki Jiji ko kuch nahi hoga hosla rakhiye. (Just then, Manyata comes inside lost in thoughts.) Manyata!! (Jay runs to her while she ignores everyone and goes to her room.)

Rajmata: Sab theek hoga unhe sochne ka wakt dijiye, Komal. Giriraj, aaj raat ke liye yahi ruk jayiye beta. Waise bahut der ho chuki hai. (Jay and Unnati share room while Uday's room is opposite of Manyata. He tries to look from window but she closes curtains as soon as she enters.) 

(In the middle of the night, he wakes up and finds Manyata in garden, deep in thoughts. He thinks to talk to her but refrains.) 

(Next morning, everyone are at breakfast just then, Manyata comes down to join them.)