Book: Angels and Demons by CoversForFree20010
Reviewer: Anubis_Styx
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Title [5/5]
It is a pretty name! I also think it fits well with your book and cover!
Cover [5/5]
They say don't judge a book by its cover... well I'm judging this book by this cover. OMG it's absolutely B-E-A-U-T-I-F-U-L! If I saw this cover I'd want to read the book because that cover is very attractive.
Blurb/Synopsis [3/5]
Your blurb gives too much information away. While it's short, you pretty much tell the reader what is gonna happen and then end it in a rhetorical question. I'd advise to never put questions in a blurb because then it's like, "Well now I know it's gonna happen." But overall it's short and sweet, and good.
Genre [5/5]
Your characters fit well with your genre!
Originality [10/10]
I personally think your book is unique. While I've read similar books yours still shows distinctive differences that set it apart! Congrats!
Descriptions [8/10]
Your descriptions are good but sometimes misworded so they are harder to understand. But overall they get the job done I just wouldn't say they're 10/10 descriptions. I'd advise maybe reading you paragraphs to make sure they make sense, or get someone else to!
Character Development [10/10]
Your characters are consistent and are developed very well.
Plot [9/10]
There aren't any plot holes as far as I can see and it's a consistent speed. I like where the story is going! It's decently unique and that's good as well! Great job.
Grammar [13/15]
I saw a few grammar mistakes throughout but nothing major. You also have a typo in your blurb, "...she is half angle angel(,) half demon..."
Structure [5/5]
Your dialogue is good, and you split your paragraphs well. I didn't see any structure problems.
Vocabulary/Spelling [8/10]
Like I said in the grammar section, there are very minor mistakes throughout but overall not that many. Just a quick look through will do!
Overall Enjoyment [10/10]
I enjoyed this!
[ Total: 91/100 ]
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