The Glitch within Time《Mono x Reader》| DISCONTINUED

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Hey guys! I apologize that this isn't an update, but I need your help. While brainstorming for this fanfic, I've remembered that after the characters leave the hospital, they'll have to go one of the major parts of the story: Chasing the Thin man down. But the thing is, I don't like that. I want the characters to spend some time together; to bond and gain each others' trust first before Mono faces off his future self. I've been thinking about adding the barber, but I don't think it's a good idea.

I need a new area that our characters can stay for a while and escape from a new, big enemy. I want them to work together as a group. If you think about it, Mono did most of the job in the game. I do have some ideas that you can help me choose. You are welcome to share some recommendations! Here are some ideas I can think of:

1. The park

The three have come into a park and decided to have some fun for a bit. They get to learn more about each other, like how Mono and Six first met and where the reader comes from. While playing in the playground, there was a security guard, who will become the new enemy for this area, walk around the park and chase them down. The guard may not know what time it is, but he does know that no one should be in the park at that time.

2. The mall

I figured a mall would be a good idea since it is a big place and there can be some few obstacles for the characters to work together. But I need some minor enemies like the bullies and the patients. I'm not sure about making mannequins as the enemies since they're quite similar to the patients. The enemy for that area can be the security guard, similar to the park.

3. The pie shop

Not just a pie shop, but a meat pie shop. I'm pretty sure you all know where this is going. And if you don't, this area will be a big reference to Mrs. Lovett's pie shop from the musical 'Sweeney Todd.' Of course, the enemy for this round will be the baker herself. Just like the maw, the food can be very... cannibalistic. As much as there wasn't any customers to serve, she still bake in case if there is one. Running out of meat, she found some dead viewers that she found to be useful. She will chase the characters down to turn them into her beloved meat pies.

4. The barber shop

I know I said that the barber may not be a good idea, but I think it can still work. I just need some few ideas on what to add there. I don't think it is a good idea because the area is a bit small. There isn't that much obstacles but only running away from the barber.

If you all have different ideas, you can share them here!

I've also realized that most of the enemies in the game are just children's classic fear. For example, kids have a fear of being hunted down/getting chased, getting their teacher angry, getting bullied in school, going to the doctors, and growing up alone.

Welp, that is all for now. I am still working on the new chapter, pretty sure it will be out next week. Since there will be no new chapter this week, have this meme and the video above instead. I hope you all have a good day/night, stay safe everyone!