SELCOUTH BTS FANFICTION AWARDS 2021. [CLOSED]

OT7 CATEGORY OTHER RESULTS

Judge: btsachu

Book : Harem

Author : rabisworld02

Title 5/5
Cover 2/5
Blurb 4/5
First impression 14/20
Plot 15.3/20
Flow 5.3/10
Emotions 4.5/10
Grammar and vocals 6/10
Character development 5.8/10
Overall 3.5/5
Total marks 65.4/100

Reviews : firstly don't feel demotivated. I know you can write even better but there are certain things you wanna note before writing a story. First the importance of cover. A book cover is what readers get mostly attached to,so therefore create covers with simple editing to attract the readers.

Same goes for the blurb. The blurb views your entire plot which is a negative. So try using mysterious quotes or you can add dialogues from your book itself.  Try using adventure or mystery or angst in your book. The plot which you taken was good but when i read the initial chapters it didn't excited me that is because the story line was a  bit rushed with grammar and spelling mistakes. So before updating read
the chapter in readers mode it will surely help.

Try using the above mentioned genre in your upcoming stories. And remember dear,readers will not leave the book if it contain mysterious or agst or a little bit romance.  For your next book I will surely look forward.

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Book: Purple glow

by zurafa978

Judge: btsachu

Title 5/5
Cover 3.8/5
Blurb 5/5
Plot 20/20
First impression 14.2/20
Flow 4/10
Emotions 2.2/10
Characterdevelopment 8/10
Grammar and development 5/10
Overall 3/5
Total marks 70.2/100

Reviews: don't feel sad okay. I'm just trying to help you with your book. So firstly I'm gonna point out about my first  impression and to be honest the first chapters as not at all understandable and it made even more difficult for me when there was no paragraphs at all. So make sure to use paragraph in first chapter the rest  were well written in paragraph so no need to change that. For cover its simple yet beautiful but in my opinion you could have added a little bit of editing too (Just my opinion)

For emotions  I'm so sorry to say this dear but honestly speaking i didn't felt anything. The chapters were too blunt without any exciting elements. So try adding something  more exciting in upcoming chapters.

Now for grammar and vocals there are so many spelling mistakes without your knowledge. For example in chapter 5 it's " We'll be caution from now on " not " well be cautious form now on". So make sure to correct the spelling. Use Google to correct the spelling you are confused about .

Writing preview for next chapter is okay but you should have started this pattern from the first chapter onwards we don't want someone to point that as a negative remark right? So make sure to do it. You can remove that preview or add previews on all chapters it's your choice.

And I saw your chapters are pretty much shuffled right? There are two solution s you can clear it.

1) click "tables of contents" and drag your chapters in correct order it will eventually get saved. If this  is not working then,

2) Uninstall wattpad without logging out then install it again. Your  chapters will be in correct order. If this is not helpful then,

3) logout from wattpad then login ( don't forget to remember your wattpad password). This three methods will be helpful  for you.

Your plot is too Good,so make sure to follow the reviews and use it wisely. That's all. Good luck.

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2) Book : So Show Me

Jelly1799

Judge: btsachu

Title 5/5
Cover 5/5
Blurb 5/5
First impression 18/20
Plot 20/20
Flow 5.3/10
Emotions 5.7/10
Grammar and vocals 7.6/10
Characterdevelopment 8.5/10
Overall 4.7/5
Total marks 84.8/100

Reviews: excellent plot with good description,A plus point for your story. But the problem is that sometimes the chapters felt rushed sometimes not so make sure to keep characters in a balanced pace,but still it kept me entertained. And for emotions to be honest I didn't felt that much to the point I will cry or laugh. So make sure to read the chapters as a reader not as an author before updating. For grammar I reduced the marks because of spelling mistakes so make sure of that too. Make sure to check this things, I'm sure you are gonna be a great author.
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Judge btsachu
Category OT7
Book: We will survive by binibiningjuana

Title 5/5
A really appropriate headline for the plot.

Blurb 5/5
Good work in this section. I'm awe struck.

Cover 5/5
I'm speechless. The editing is really authentic.

Plot 20/20
Excellent work.

First impression 20/20
One of the most difficult sections, but you made through it. The first chapter was really entertaining.

Flow 8.2/10
It went very smoothly until you used the Korean language in between.

Emotions 4/10
Reduced the marks because I didn't felt that much.

Character development 8/10
Focus a little more on the conversation going on. I didn't see much character development.

Grammar and vocals. 8/10
Tense and punctuation is really done well. I reduced the score because I found a ver few mistakes.

Overall 4.1/5
If you are all willing to pick out a few adventurous stories,this book is a good choice.

Total marks 87.3/100

We hope you will consider these tips and modify your work. We really are glad to have you guys with us. Hope to see you all in near future.