SELCOUTH BTS FANFICTION AWARDS 2021. [CLOSED]

YOONGI CATEGORY OTHER RESULTS

MAFIA X MAFIA

By: Bts_forlife21

Reviewed by: -YEEHOBI-

Tittle: 3/5
it isnt very attracting and doesn't quite create curiousity.

Cover: 4/5
       Its cool.

Blurb: 2/5
       It clearly states the reason why the reader (Y/N) has a mysterious and cold personality. there is a very tiny bit of redundancy.

First Impression: 12/20
  I wasn't exactly excited to read the book because of the title (isn't very catchy).

Plot: 5/20
      The story has been applied for 'min yoongi' category yet there aren't much interactions between the main characters. 'Y/N' is much, much more involved with supporting characters.

Flow: 3/10
      Not much rushed, but understanding which speaker said which dialogue was very hard; even more confusing because of switching from saying in quotes to the texting format. The scene was hard to comprehend as well.

Emotions: 5/10
  The author needs to improve details. I could not feel the emotions described in the book.

Grammar & Vocabulary: 4/10
      There are many grammatical errors & a few typos. Misuse of homophonic words. Read the chapter for a few times before you publish it. Overuse of punctuations ('!!!!', '?!?!'). Some sentences lack the proper punctuations as well. Vocabulary isn't very great, usage of rarer words would help in enhancing the writing.

Character Development: 6.5/10
       It is messy, hard to understand what the characters are trying to make the readers feel.

Overall: 2/5

Total: 46.5/100

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by Mochi_Panda_0317

Judged by: NimishaTrivedi

Title: its quirky and it indirectly tells everything about the story.
4/5

Cover: its good but I think it'd be better if some more editing will be done.
3/5

Blurb: blurb is so good, you define the story well.
4/5

First impression: Didn't see anything special but it's written with skills.
17/20

Plot: I love the plot.
19/20

Flow: didn't see anything wrong with the flow and I think it's going good.
9/10

Emotions: The emotions are expressed in a good way.
8/10

Grammar and Vocabulary: The writting seems perfect to me.
9/10

Character Development: I can say that, characters and their personalities are great.
4/5

Total: 88/100

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Mystic Silence by

CaptainCork

Judge: NimishaTrivedi

Title: its distinctive and fits the story very well.
4/5

Cover: its virtuous and the editing is good.
3/5