SELCOUTH BTS FANFICTION AWARDS 2021. [CLOSED]

RESULT FOR KIM TAEHYUNG CATEGORY

Hello guys !!

As we said before, we are here with the reviews of our participants who couldn't win.

So this part contain reviews of

KIM TAEHYUNG CATEGORY
Participants.

Let's Start......

1) Title: Save me army

Author: marie0211

Judged by Darksoul075

Title - 4/5

It really was unique to think about this title and it's quite relatable to the story.

Cover - 2/5

The cover indeed looks good but u just put the text on it. I didn't see any creativity.

Blurb - 3/5

It was small to describe the story and it doesn't define the story well but the writing was creative.

First impression - 13/20

I like how the story started and including the thoughts, i like it but I was expecting to see a wow in it which i didn't get.

Plot - 14/20

The blurb was interesting enough to open the book but when you open the book, it really looks boring.

Flow - 7/10

The story was a little slow according to me.

Emotions - 7/10

It wasn't that detailed, i didn't get any emotions but to sensitive peoples, they might take it too deeply.

Grammar and vocabulary - 8/10

I love the writing style but if the story would have been more detailed, i would love it and there were no grammatical errors.

Character development - 7/10

The characters really need improvement in showing their emotions.

Overall - 3/5

The story plot was great but needs to work on it little bit.

Total - 68/100

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Title: Angel Academy
Written by: Antusama

Judged by VSeoyoon

Title: 3/5

Yes it does match the plot of the book and everything,
but I feel like they could have used another name, this
one is very bland and well, seems to reveal much of the
book's plot.

Cover: 1/5

The cover... Well yes it does match the book's theme
and description, plot. But everything is just very random.
Same font is used everywhere, the fc pic is placed in
the middle of nowhere and just-
not the best cover.

Blurb: 5/5

Its explained just the right amount, I absolutely love it!
The readers attention is grabbed onto the book by
the blurb and its awesome!