SELCOUTH BTS FANFICTION AWARDS 2021. [CLOSED]

RESULT FOR PARK JIMIN CATEGORY

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As we said before, we are here with the reviews of our participants who couldn't win.

So this part contain reviews of

KIM TAEHYUNG CATEGORY
Participants.

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Judged by : akr_2204

Book:- Back to You

Written by gucci_gold_

Title: 4/5

Cover: 3/5

Blurb: 4/5

First Impression: 17/2

Plot: 14/20

Flow:9/10

Grammar and Vocabulary:7/10

Characters: 5/10

Overall:2/5

Total:66/100

Review ::

Above all the story is nice but is a cliche. From the beginning, that is the title and blurb, it goes with the plot of the story. However, the cover doesn't match the essence of the book, try changing the image. As for the plot, it is little, very cliche. Everything goes on in the favour of the female lead and there is not major plot twist nor uniqueness in the plot which makes it a little boring, but the flow which is perfectly runs through the context keeps up the readers. Being a reader I couldn't feel much of the emotion described in the book, pls work on that. The grammar is good but the vocabulary needes to be improved. The too good to be true behavior of every character with the female lead seemed uncertain. Therefore, it is just an another book in Idol AU nothing very extraordinary.

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Book :: Night Poison

Author :: WhenItIsBlue

Cover :: 2/5

Blurb:: 3.5/5

First impression :: 12/20

Plot :: 15/20

Flow:: 8/10

Emotions :: 8.5/10

Grammar and vocals :: 9/10

Character development :: 7/10

Overall :: 3/5

Total marks :: 72/100

Review ::

First of all the cover need a little work, it's too simple to catch the reader's attention. The blurb was too lengthy and complicated, the dialogue that starts the blood should be short, quick and expressive at the same time. The main conflict however can be slightly descriptive. There were no such grammatical errors except some minute ones that can be removed through proper editing. The writing seemed poetic although the richness in the words used kept fluctuating. The first few chapters were very confusing, the facts kept changing and there were plot holes, I could see even the readers were confused. Although the book had a great build up, I was expecting an unusual climax but the intensity of the climax was new for me.
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Judge :: Author_Jenny