SELCOUTH BTS FANFICTION AWARDS 2021. [CLOSED]

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One True Pair yoonmin4lifue

Judge: shimla1210

Title-4.5/5 its good but as an audience wont be eye catching

Cover-4.5/5 the font at left bottom is soo small if u want to add add it a little it bigger

Blurb-5/5 very well done , gives the foundation of the story and doesnt give out too much of the plot

First impression-19/20 i was shocked at how it started but i didn't mind it as much when i got into the story i wished for a little understanding on their relationship that time

Plot-18.9/20 a good plot wanting for a sudden stop. just want some twist.

Flow-9.5/10 breaks here and there , but its good

Emotions- 8/10 i dont find the sweet moments the feeling , i see yoongi loving jimins dance his body smile and other things but i would want them to know each other truly , not by kindness or caring also by insecurities ,problems, and loving each others im

Vocabulary/grammar-9.8/10 very well done , very few to none gramatical issues

Character development- 8/10 till the chapters done didnt see much of it

Overall- 3.8/5 loved it but a few things i wished were
Total -91/100
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Book: Revenge
Written by: uzlove18

Judge: rabisworld02
Title: 4/5
Cover: 4/5
Blurb: 5/5
First impression: 18/20
Plot: 20/20
Flow: 8/10
Emotions: 9/10
Grammar: 9/10
Character: 9/10
Overall: 4/5
Total: 90/100

Review: its really a good and unique story. However even thought the title matches the plot line but it is too common and over used. But I personally think it was a good story. Not cliché or same revenge stories on wattpad, you write it beautifully making me read its sequel too. Good job.

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Book: Vengeance
Written by: btsachu

Judge: rabisworld02

Title: 5/5
Cover: 4/5
Blurb: 4/5
First impression: 17/20
Plot: 19/20
Flow: 8/10
Emotions: 7/10
Grammar: 7/10
Character: 8/10
Overall: 4/5
Total: 83/100

Review: Its a good and unique plot. Cover need a little improvement though. Title perfectly matches the plot line, however grammar had some faults as you should use "bought" instead of "buyed" . needs a little improvement on the emotions. But over all its good. I am waiting for the next chapter.

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By: Nike_Of_The_Hills

Judge: GryffindorPoseidon1

Book - When Our worlds collide

Title - 5/5

The title goes well with the story, and pretty catchy at the same time. But, I'm pretty sure that it says "When Our Wonders Collide" In the award shows list, so please check that out.

Cover - 1/5

The cover sure has Taekook on it, but it has the main text written in Korean, in which I'm not sure what is written. I'm assuming it means when our worlds collide or such, but i can't be sure. Also, in the middle picture, Taehyung isn't seen due to the text, so it looks like there is Jungkook on two pictures and Taehyung on only one. So, I would recommend you to change them.