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Hello everybody, my name is Markiplier.

I mean, Gray.

I used to have a small Wattpad account and then I quit, a million years ago, but with my college degree rapidly turning into a college failure I've decided to return. Since I have none of my own writing to post (yet) and I'm a workaholic who can't leisure without productivity, I've started this here review book.


The rules are simple:

- Apply using the application chapter (the chapter after this)

- Payment is a permanent follow. Please wait until after you've been accepted to pay. You must pay before I start reading your story.

- Three chapters max. If I like it I might keep reading it, but I'm only reviewing the first three chapters.

- Reviews will be posted as chapters in this book. If you ask nicely I will take your review down.

- No fanfiction. I'm sorry, I love fluff but the risk of smut is too high for my innocent angelic eyes.


I will do my best to be polite and succinct in these reviews. As mentioned above, I'm only reviewing up to the third chapter, with that in mind, here is a list of my focuses:

- Technicality (grammar, spelling, etc.)

- Hook

- Character establishment

- Syntax

- Formatting

Plot will not have a major role in my reviews because three chapters is simply not enough for a fair review of that.

Okay, I think that's all that needs to be said. Have at thee!

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