When The Curtain Falls

1 ~So Fine~

Feel free to play this song as you read. It really sets the mood for the scene.

A young, lustful couple ran down the narrow hotel hall barefoot, laughing. The rug was dirty and matted to the floor making their feet as black as coal. The young woman, Bella, was about 20 years old. Her long dirty blond hair trailed behind her as they laughed, but tried to keep quiet. Suddenly, the man she was with, who was handsomely dressed in a casual suit, three of the buttons on his shirt always undone, suddenly grabbed Bella and covered her mouth, pinning her to the wall outside of her room. A smile broke through his hand as she looked into his deep brown eyes and his contagious smile. He brushed Bella's hair out of her face and kissed her before Bella unlocked her small, dirty hotel room. He pushed Bella inside and shut the door behind him, locking it. They resumed where they were outside and he kissed her again, but soon stopped.

"Is something wrong?" Bella asked, eagerly.

"Are you sure you want to do this?" he asked Bella. She questioned herself for a minute, not sure why. I looked into his eyes and ran my fingers through his long dark hair. She knew he felt different than the other many flings she's had.

"Yes," she replied devilishly and without hesitation he picked Bella up and she screamed as he slammed her down on the bed. He eagerly unbuttoned Bella's shirt and Bella unbuttoned the only two buttons holding his shirt closed. He crawled on top of Bella and admired her face before kissing her, slowly and passionately. Bella grabbed him and rolled over on top of him. She felt his body...his shoulders...hair...chest...stomach...hands. It was incredible.

Bella woke up to hear a ringing in her head going off again and again. "Good morning," the mysterious man said as she opened her eyes. He was getting dressed fairly quick, quite speedy in fact, like he was racing to get somewhere.

"What's that ringing?... And what time is it" Bella asked, rubbing her eyes and sitting up.

"It's 10:30, rise and shine. Sorry if my phone woke you up. You should probably get up anyways, the day will be half over before you know it," he said calmly, despite his rushed behavior.

"I feel like shit," Bella scoffed, rubbing her head. "Where do you need to be this early?"

"Business my love, business." He replied. He gathered his things and put them into his bag. Bella got out of bed too quickly and the hangover hit her. "Here, drink this," he said, handing her a mysterious green-yellow drink. Bella stared at it with hesitation. "Trust me, it will cure your hangover," he insisted, shoving it in her hands and rushing out the door.

Bella ran to the door and screamed down the hall at the man running barefoot with a half-buttoned shirt, failing to cover his amazing body. "I don't even know your name!"

"You'll find me," he yelled back, still running. Bella was too hungover for this. You'll find me? The number of empty promises that have come out of the mouths of her one-night stand was pitiful.

Just then, she hears her phone ring. She looks over at it. It was Jenna, her best friend. "Where are you? We have things to do before our big night out!" Jenna began to say.

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