Intermission

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Hello and welcome to the INTERMISSION between games. Here I'll be just saying random nonsense about the book and accepting questions so if you have anything you wanna ask or just here to give a compliment go ahead! This is just a small break in reading the story.

So like I said if you have any questions about the story go ahead and ask them and I'll see if I can answer them. Now here's some fun trivia about how I wanted to the story to go originally:

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In the long term, I wanted (L/n) and Haruka to get together in Yakuza 5.
Decided against it because of the 8 year age difference, they're closer to siblings the more I wrote for them, and Song of Life's story would've been fucked unless I made the reader the son of a particular character.

In Substory 1 I wanted (L/n) to meet Komaki and slowly learn Tiger Drop throughout the story but I felt it's too OP for you to have it so early so I held off, you will learn it just not now.

Speaking of Tiger Drop, I was originally gonna have the fight with Juno end with it. Punching him through a window after he tries to attack you from behind, him hanging off the edge, and you offering help only for him to let go knowing he lost and fall to his death.

I wanted to have more substories with Kiryu and (L/n) together but I decided against it because I wanted the stories to be completely (L/n) to establish his character and see how he reacted to situations while also making sure it didn't feel like I was just including (L/n) in stories he wasn't necessary in when Kiryu is there

I wanted the fighting styles to be in separate games! What do I mean? Well, you know Hitman... Just hitman, then in Kiwami 2 you'd learn your next style, then Remaster 3 you'd learn your third, then four you finally learn your LEGEND style... I hated this idea.

The story was really different at one point where during the thought process I thought about having (L/n) be Kiryu's kid since in Y0 Kiryu does go on dates with girls he meets through the phone minigame but I thought (L/n) being his own character was better... Plus I think there's a thing where the game producer says Kiryu may be a virgin so... Yeah.

Also thanks to thealpha001 for the idea that (L/n) gets shot at the end. Well their idea had (L/n) get shot in the head and die, it gave me the idea and scene you all read in the finale, just thought I'd thank him since that was not in the original plan at all.

Fighting Style REJECTS!
These are the styles that were considered instead of HITMAN, SHARK, and LOTUS at one point before I decided to scrap it. Although I may include them as something else.

-Oni Style: Weapon oriented just like Slugger from Y0, this style gave you a katana giving you swift slashing attacks and no mercy finishers. (Would've replaced HITMAN)

-Gorilla Style: So you know that substory with the judo guy, Shinohara? Yeah, pretty much that with lots of grabbing and throwing... So pretty much judo... (Would've replaced LOTUS)

-Koi Style: So originally I wanted the reader to get kidnapped and instead of tortured to death to get to Kazama and Kiryu, Nishiki would've tried to sway you on his side and teach you quite a bit. I couldn't think of an escape or explanation or how much time has passed so I went in another direction. (Would've replaced SHARK)

-Snake Style: This is honestly just lotus with more snake-like movement but I went another direction since I didn't like the fact I would be putting two styles named after animals. (Would've replaced LOTUS)

-Dragon Style: Yes I know, I'm dumb and crazy, I thought instead of Komaki I'd have Kiryu train you at one point. This was quickly scrapped (Would've replaced SHARK)

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Okay, that's about it, but since you've stuck with me this entire time and clearly enjoy the story I think I'll give you a little peek at what's next..........

(L/n): "Come on, just a little peek?"

Saya: "(Y/n), stop it~"

She giggles as I held her against the wall, kissing her cheek and the corner of her lips. I had my hand sliding up and down her leg.

(L/n): "I ain't asking for the full thing, just a sneak peek?"

Saya: "You have to be patient." she smiles putting her arms around me, "You always gotta work hard for the good ones~"

(L/n): "Hard to argue with that."

We kiss deeply, our hearts beating hard before I groan feeling my phone buzz. I pull it out and peck Saya's lips before answering.

(L/n): "Yo, (L/n) here."

Kashiwagi: "(L/n)-kun, are you busy?"

(L/n): "Depends on what you're about to ask me." I wink at Saya making her quietly giggle before she starts kissing under my chin, "What's up?"

Kashiwagi: "I just got out of a meeting and I have a bad feeling about something, so I need you to watch somebody in another family, make sure they don't get themselves killed."

(L/n): "No problem, not my first babysitting job, who is it?"

Kashiwagi: "I need to watch and assist... Majima-san."

I was barely listening as Saya cupped my face to look at her, getting lost in her eyes.

(L/n): "Oh yeah, no problem. I'll keep an eye out."

Kashiwagi: "Oh, thank you, was worried you'd refuse. Call me if you have anything to report."

(L/n): "You got it." I hung up and pulled Saya closer, "Now where were we?"

She smiles as we resume our kiss until reality just hits and I freeze, pulling back from the kiss with my eyes opened wide and skin pale as snow while Saya tried to ask what was wrong. My entire body stiff as I blurt out without realizing it.

"I'M WATCHING WHO?!"


COMING SOON: MAJIMA CHAPTERS!

COMING SOON: MAJIMA CHAPTERS!

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