after a long awaited wait...
like the whole fuvking summer...
And maybe a few months...
shit idk, I've been procrastinating so much...
TELLYTALLY HAS RETURNED TO EDIT AND MAKE THE STORY BETTER:
*empty stadium with my friends clapping once. Just once*
The so far Edits that will happen will be plot/lore based, and to save you from going back to read all of that shiz, I've so kindly made you a list of what's changed (with reasons too!). This also includes what has happened in the story so far too:
- Prophecy about Mother's necklace=gone. Reason: What is this, Percy Jackson? Cliche, had no more mention past the one chapter where it was brought into, and overall I thought it was cringe.
- The horse you have, Heriath or whatever, is currently chilling in their stable living out their life. They have no more significant plot based actions in the story at this moment. In the comments yall can come up with a 'Hapilly ever after' story for them.
- Overarching story problem/conflict is about (Y/N) trying to find out thier past, as they are currently trying to outgrow thier Ranboo arc. With past trauma of her father dying (which I wrote as them totally playing it off so unrealistically lol) and thier mothers strange appearances and mysterious behaviour, it made sense for them to try and reveal thier own past while struggling with the present ones. They only knew familly love, and that was shattered. Loved Ryan, and that soon disappeared (thanks Duncan you fucking ass eater). So their wary of their feelings for Karl, afraid that if they try and commit to the feelings, somthing bad will happen.
- Ryan. Good old Ryan. Is he Karl in disguise? Just a character that was used to traumatize (Y/N)? Or does he have more of a plot significance? He ended up becoming the duke of (goes back to find name of country) Timonia, so maybe things ended up well for him. But what about Duncan? Ryan's mother? (We Stan Ryan's Mother here by the way, the only most logical person in the room)
Hey, remember Karl's first skin when he 'joined' the smp. A shapeshifting blob, a mix of colours upon colours and colours and colours and sparkles and cuteness and colours and colours and colours-
He changed (Read: morphed) into a more humanoid skin. And here's a fun fact, Most of our ideas come from a bunch of other ideas jammed together to create somthing 'new'. Kind of like how most 'prophecy' plot based books are inspired by Percy Jackson. (just a example btw)
(If you didn't understand what was written above, honestly, me neither)
- (Y/N). Their a bit... complicated. I'm going back to rewrite how their character reacts to things, AS THEY DO NOT REACT PROPERLY/REALISTICLY IN SITUATIONS. Her father sacrificing himself to 'save' her? She just walked out, a bit numb, but no tears, anguish, grief. She just ran away. Maybe she's been running away from feelings this whole time though. After all, feelings have just ruined her, and thoughts around her. It's like she's cursed, but what has she done? Is it somthing that she did in a past life that's killing her now? (or maybe it's something her parents did...)
Then she blew a fuse, after learning that a brother like figure in her life died. All those squashed feelings came too life, and uncontrollable grief hit her in the hardest (😏) way. Sam the Warden had to face her wrath, but he was able to calm her.
Words speak less then actions though, and forgiveness is a word that is thrown around carelessly. They, (y/n), starves for something, something that they want, no NEEDS, in thier life. Maybe it isn't just 'power' but the ability to control, to have people not fuck her up anymore. With the amount of villages they've been through, many many villages/town, they've always rejected her. They always have, a small feeling of panic just by being in (Y/N)'s presence.
And what about the mini-problem? Badboyhalo and the Egg? How come (Y/N) was so uncomfortable first meeting him. What was his cannonical charecter again? A demon if I'm correct, and what is the o-
(*hence scene where author is getting the shit slapped out of them for revealing too much*)
- Quackity. My poor man is obsessed with power, almost like how (Y/N) wants the power of control over their own life (mistakenly thought and written like they want the power and control over others). Yea, that is basically all.
-This story has way too many fillers, like what is this, fucking Naruto? I'm gonna go back and add more Karl x Y/N drama and romantic stuff lol.
EDITING: I will try to finish the story first before I go back and edit. This might be a thing where I put this up, and then come back a year later to actually edit lol.
THANK YOU ALL OF YOU FOR SUPPORTING.
Note as of: 12/13/21
yeah so I didn't update-
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