Beta Lumity ( university edition)

Update or something

Hi its me ok so I have some ideas and I would like to see if you guys like them so if you like them I will do them and vice versa 

Idea one: 

I will make shorter paragraphs yep that is idea one heh 

Idea two: 

I am going to change the format of characters speaking so something like this

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Luz POV

I walked out of my room with a smirk across my face and my eyes darted around the dorm for Amity and I spotted her sitting on the sofa 

me: Hay Amity you know who joe is?

Amity looked confused and I tried to hold back my laugher

Amity: no I don't know who joe is 

me: HAHAHAH joe mama AHAAH

Amity bolted up walked to the kitchen grabbed something and hid is behind her back and as quick as the wind she plunged a Knife in to my gut after that she fled the country

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Beautiful I know so if you guys want this change just idk comment I want this also if you have any ideas to improve this I am all ears ok Bye