Response to Poem 2

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These days are icier

Cold threads staining,

Like how I imagine snowflakes

Are supposed to feel,

Rend across skin like pale strikes

From a knife

Rain screams down from the heavens

Breaking like shards of deadly glass

Beating itself over on soaked pavements

The world flashes electric

As the sky tears itself in two

Followed by the drums of the thunder

The wind howls forlorn

Like a lost child in the world

Sending flakes of water fleeting

Into the room through

Windows nobody bothered to close

The door is still wide and open

And the gust slams it shut

Closing another door in this cold world


Why not snow?

Why not shining white snow?

Better than the rending darkness

Better than the screaming storms

That tear like raging beasts

Why not the prettier version,

Sun against a shimmering world

Overlaid with that plush sheen

So proud and so perfect?

Why let the rain close the door on us

When we could just leave it open?


And yet nobody can think to care

Nobody walks up and opens it again

Because all it will do

Is close in our faces again

No, we're laughing

There are words on the board

And we've coagulated into groups

Animated in our words

Brave in the way we stand our points

There's laughter in the air

And our voices are many and one

So loud

Louder than even the rain can scream

This room is not cold


Today, this room will not be cold

So it's okay, even if thunder rolls

It's just a reminder

That we can be louder than the rain

That we are louder than the rain

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