Bapa vs Bomika

Our "Date"

Bose's POV
We are walking towards nacho ball and for some reason, we pass nacho ball. I stop walking and Chapa goes on
Bose: aren't we going into nacho ball?
Chapa: *stops walking* I'm not hungry any more. *turns to bose* your not hungry are you?

Oh man. We're not going in nacho ball. So where are we gonna go? It's not a date is it? Am I on some kind of date with Chapa? Why am I nervous?! What's happening?! Am I shivering?
Chapa: Bose!
Bose: huh?
Chapa: dude, are you okay? Oh my gosh ur shivering! Here take my Jersey *takes it off and gives bose*
Bose: *starts to blush* I can't take that

Chapa looks lost and then starts to laugh when she realises why I can't
Chapa: oh I'm sorry Sir. Bose *makes a curtsy towards Bose* does this go against every rule of chivalry? *laughs more*

I grew much redder (if that's a real word)
Chapa: just take it, I got it from a guys' clothes store anyway. So it'll look like its yours
Bose: *still blushing* thanks
Chapa: let's go to the park

Chapa's POV
We walk to the park and looked for one of the benches with a lovely view. When we sat, there was a feel of comfortable silence. I like it, I like him...wait, as in how he keeps me free and...uhmm yeah

Bose's POV
The view is just as beautiful as Chapa is. Yeah I know what I said, and I meant it! It was quiet, but nice. After a while Chapa lays her head on my shoulder and that's when that shiver feeling came back
Chapa: bose, your shivering again. It ain't that cold I swear...your not sick are you?
Bose: no I just....
Chapa: you know wat, I think I know what could get you warmed up
Bose: what?
Chapa: wanna play hide n seek?
Bose: hide n seek? Just the two of us?
Chapa: yeah. I mean the park is practically empty, which gives me enough space to make you run and heat up
Bose: *blushes* okay sure

After I faced a tree and counted to 20, I started my search for Chapa. It was kinda hard because Chapa is really good at hiding things or herself. I then heard her say "ha! Sucker!" From behind a bush and she started running knowing that I'd run too
I chased her...well...the sound of the running and she's right, hide and seek did make me run and I felt warm too. It went silent.

Chapa's POV
I hid in the bushes right behind Bose and he looked like he was ready to pounce on the person talking to another guy on a bench. I don't blame him though, he was wearing a black shirt and I was wearing a black shirt so yeah. He looked like a cop too
Man 1: so tell me, did you see this person
Man 2: no I didn't

It looked serious and Bose was gonna disturb it all. I stayed for a little to see how it will play out
Bose: found you, Chapa *tapping the "cop"*
Man 1: what the-?!
Man 2: *runs away*
Bose: uhhhh.....
Chapa: run! *whispers behind bose and grabs his hand*

We ran away from that guy and he chased us obviously. I jumped into a bush and Bose lost me, so I had to pull him in. The guy ran the opposite direction and when the cost was clear, we came out of the bush and out of the park.
Chapa: *laughing*
Bose:*blushing from embarrassment* it's not funny!
Chapa: yes it is! *laughs even more*
Bose: you cant speak of this to any one!
Chapa:*recovering from laugh* Haaaa, I can't make any promises
Bose: that's not fair!
Chapa: life ain't fair, baby

He stops walking and freezes. And I freeze after stepping like 6 feet ahead of him, realising what I just said. I start walking back trying to clear my mistake
Chapa: oh no, I-I didnt mean.....I-I wanted to say.. uhm...I meant-

Then he kissed me. He.kissed.ME. HE KISSED ME!! I got this weird feeling in my stomach like...like something was eating me on the inside. It wasn't painful and not bad but it was just weird
He pulled back from the kiss and we were both red
Bose: I am so sorry! I didnt mean to- I-I don't know why I-
Chapa: we don't speak of this to anyone!
Bose: deal!
Chapa: I mean nobody needs to know that we...yeah
Bose: yeah. And that I...yeah
Chapa: yeah. And that I...yeah
Bose: yeah

It was a really awkward walk back
Chapa: for all the others know, we walked to nacho ball the nice one, ordered a bunch of food and walked back
Bose: good idea

Is it too long? Or is it too short? Its ayt right?........idk really