Hey guys. I'm rewriting the story because I feel it can be so much better. But I want to know what I can improve on.
What should I improve on?
Grammar? Spelling? Length? Description?
Should there be more drama or less?
If less, list the three things that I should keep, besides Brad cheating.
If more, tell me two things that should happen.
The story will remain up, but I will rewrite each chapter and change it and add it too the end of the story and it will say NEW. (For example: NEW 3 days unseen)
Thank you.
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The Affair
ChickLitBrad Moore had it all, a beautiful wife, two amazing girls, a great job as a lawyer, everything anyone could imagine. What else could he ask for? Well, when he meets the hot new secretary at the law firm, will the temptation get to him? Will he for...
