Rewrite

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Hey guys. I'm rewriting the story because I feel it can be so much better. But I want to know what I can improve on.

What should I improve on?

Grammar? Spelling? Length? Description?

Should there be more drama or less?

If less, list the three things that I should keep, besides Brad cheating.

If more, tell me two things that should happen.

The story will remain up, but I will rewrite each chapter and change it and add it too the end of the story and it will say NEW. (For example: NEW 3 days unseen)

Thank you.

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