Hey everyone, thank you so much for your patience as I reconstruct The Crimson Pack. I have given it the first *glamour* or whatnot. I will probably go back and tweak a few things depending on criticism.
Some of the changes I've made;
- Dana and the boys are in their final year of high school- they are all 18. If this is still too young for you, then this book is not for you.
- I have removed about half of the smut scenes due to it just feeling too rushed and it made a lot of people uncomfortable, especially because Dana did not technically give consent. I have changed it so that the scenes stop before they officially start, and when it does go all of the way, Dana does give consent. Consent is important and I apologize to those who I may have unintentionally harmed for making it seem like I didn't believe that.
- I did keep the dubious consent scene in chapters 21 and 23. There are blatant content warnings on the beginning of those chapters. There is a reason I am keeping this scene in that is explained briefly in the sequel 'The Ram Pack' which I am also planning on reconstructing.
- I changed a few of her outfit choices and the way she talks a bit- but she's still the Dana we know and love!
- I have also changed the guys appearance so now there's actual character description and not just 'blonde hair, gray eyes.'
Those are the changes (that I can think of atm) that I've made so far- if you have any suggestions on how to make this book better or improve my writing skills- please comment!!
- M
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The Crimson Pack
Kurt AdamDana is a normal girl, well that was until 6 days ago, then she started hearing a voice in her head and woke up butt-naked next to her apartment. Imagine her surprise when she finds out she's been sheltered from a VERY important secret her whole lif...
