Percy Jackson protector of the hunt

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Percy POV

It started out like any other day. I woke up, ate breakfast, went to training, then sat on the beach looking out over the oceans feeling good. However that all changed when I heard a scream from up by Thalia's tree. I ran pulling out Riptide. Lucky I did, because what I saw was not good. There was a young blonde teenager running for his life trying to avoid a couple hellhounds. I quickly ran down and stood in front of the kid. I swung my sword quickly slicing the hellhounds. They burst into a yellow powder and blew away in the wind. I turned around and looked at the kid. "you ok?" I asked. He had this look of utter amazement on his face. "Yeah, thanks for coming out to save me." I nodded and pulled him up to his feet. I looked at him and asked, "You look familiar. Do I know you from somewhere?" He shook his head and said. "I don't think so, but you may have known my brother. Luke Castellan" I stopped in my tracks and looked the boy in the face. The more I looked, the more I realized that he wasn't joking. He had the same blonde hair, the same mischievous smile and as soon as we stepped across the border a caduceus floated above his head. I smiled, "What's your name?" He looked at me and said, "Ryan Castellan." "Well welcome Ryan Castellan, Son of Hermes, to Camp Half-blood." He smiled. At the same time that the caduceus faded from above his head Chiron rode up with his bow in hand. He looked at me and said, "Percy is everything ok?" I nodded and said, "Yeah Chiron everything is ok, just a new camper trying to get to camp, he got attacked by a couple of hellhounds." Chiron nodded and put his bow away. "Hello son," Chiron said while looking at Ryan. Ryan had a look of utter amazement on his face. I smiled this always happened anytime someone first met Chiron. I walked away back toward the beach cause I knew that Chiron would take care of Ryan and make sure that he got to the right place. I sat down on the beach and smiled. There wasn't any place like home.

~~~~~ Time Skip to the end of the week~~~~~

Dinner had just finished and Chiron pounded his hoof on the ground. Everyone looked up and suddenly the energy in the room multiplied by about one hundred. Everyone knew what was about to happen. "Tonight we are playing capture the flag. Athena's cabin has one flag, and Ares' has the other. Creek is the boundary, no killing or maiming. All magic items are aloud. Prisoners can be bound but not gagged. Take your positions." With a sudden surge, the entire camp ran towards the forest. It was going to be a good night. At least that's what I thought. We all got into place and waited for the horn to sound. I surged forward with Annabeth on my left, and Conner and Travis Stoll on my right. The plan was simple, I was to go straight up the center and draw as much attention to myself as possible, while Annabeth and the Stolls would go around the sides and get the flag. After a couple feet, Annabeth disappeared using her Yankees cap, while the Stolls started to head out the other way. After a couple more feet I saw Clarisse running straight towards me, with her electric spear. She swung trying to take me out before I could do too much damage. I blocked with Riptide and snapped around with my shield, hitting her in the side. She went down trying to catch her breath. Before she could raise too much alarm, I knocked her out with the butt of my sword. I took off running again when three sons of Hephaestus blocked my path. I smiled tonight was definitely going to be fun. I quickly incapacitated them and continued to run. When suddenly I heard cheers coming from the Athena side. I turned around and saw Conner and Travis cross the boundary. As soon as they did the flag changed from red, to more of a silver with a caduceus painted on it. We had won. I was about to join in the reveling when I blood curdling scream erupted in the cool night air. I looked around to see if anyone else heard the sound. The looks on their faces told me enough. I ran to were the sound had come from and quickly found Clarisse in a bloody pulp with one of the Aphrodite campers standing there looking like she was about to faint. I looked at Leo who was standing close by and said, "Help me get Clarisse to the infirmary. And someone make sure that she" I pointed my head at the Aphrodite camper, "doesn't hurt herself by fainting." It seemed like hours, but soon Leo and I had dragged Clarisse back into the infirmary. We set her down on a bed when an Apollo camper asked what had happened. "I don't know" I answered out of breath. "He nodded and slowly started to feed her ambrosia and nectar. After a few minutes her eyes fluttered open and she looked at me and screamed. "Punk if you so much as touch me again I will send you to Hades myself." This kind of shocked me. We had never been friendly, but she never spoke to me like that before. "What do you mean?" asked Leo. "He knows exactly what I mean." I actually didn't and it must have shown on my face, because she said, "After he knocked me out I was semi conscience. He left then came back and start to cut me with his sword. He was the one that sent me to this blasted infirmary." Leo looked at me shocked. The Apollo camper actually looked at me with disgust. I was confused so I walked out of the infirmary with Clarisse cursing at me the entire way out. I walked to my cabin to think about what had happened. I just couldn't come up with an answer that made sense, because I had been going up the middle the entire time. I fell asleep thinking about it.