Author: AnshaBhatia.
Reviewer: DragonOrchid24.
First Glance:
Cover Image: 5/5
Title: 3/5
Blurb/Synopsis: 3/5
First Paragraph: 4/5
Cover Image: Clearly fits genre and indicates what the story is about. It seems cute.
Title: From the blurb it appears that this is the opposite of paradise, but maybe that changes?
Blurb/Synopsis: Some small errors in the writing, and it's not entirely clear on how they become roommates from this outline, but I am curious to find out more.
First Paragraph: Good action to start with, encourages me to keep reading.
Chapter 1: Hello, Roommate
Characters: 4/5
Writing: 3/5
Storyline: 4/5
Engagement: 3/5
Some small grammar mistakes, and I would have liked to know more about the character right away instead of focusing on only the dog. Overall, it's an interesting start with good descriptions of the characters. Some of the conversation seemed to jumbo to a different tone of voice, but maybe there is a reason for this. The storyline is quickly progressing and it is engaging.
Chapter 2: Trouble at the door
Characters: 4/5
Writing: 3/5
Storyline: 4/5
Engagement: 4/5
The story progresses along nicely, though it still leaves some questions about the characters' lives. There are some small mistakes in the writing but it doesn't detract too much from the story itself. Overall, I can feel the story start to pick up and I am curious where this is going.
Chapter 3: My nightmares come true
Characters: 4/5
Writing: 3/5
Storyline: 3/5
Engagement: 3/5
A little bit of confusion over what is happening, but overall gave a good impression of how the two main characters interact.
Chapter 4: Forgiveness is for the Gods
Characters: 4/5
Writing: 4/5
Storyline: 4/5
Engagement: 4/5
Good chapter, you get to see more of the main character's work life and her reactions to her current circumstances.
Chapter 5:
Characters: 5/5
Writing: 4/5
Storyline: 4/5
Engagement: 4/5
Good chapter, I enjoyed the character banter and humor.
Conclusion:
Overall I enjoyed the story and while there are some minor edits needed, it doesn't detract too much from the overall classic one, and while I would like to know more clear information about how the characters ended up in this situation (why they became roommates), I can appreciate the humor (and frustration), in their situation and I look forward to reading more.
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