The Girl Who Was Afraid | 🌼

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Reviewer: imogenogucci01.
Author: LucyAnnWrites

Title: 10/10
It perfectly describes Cerise.


Cover: 10/10
It suits the genre and the time period.


Description: 5/5
It is simple and stories curiosity.


Grammer, spelling or vocabulary: 5/5It is well edited, I didn't come across any Grammer or spelling errors.


Pacing: 10/10I appreciate the fact that we got to know Cerise before any of the main plot started.


Plot: 10/10This is a really unique plot and perfectly executed too.


Character development: 10/10Your characters feel like actual human beings, I would sometimes catch myself replying to something they said, I love that, it shows that your characters are lovable and relatable.


Writing style: 10/10It correlates with the genre.


Tension: 10/10I was thinking you would make Cerise have to take care of Mr Verns but no, you just killed him off, and honestly, I'm not mad about it.


Reader engagement: 10/10At some point I was asking myself "why on earth does this person nerd a review" I felt like your work was perfect.


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Thank You Review Posted: 6/16/23

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