This story is a mess!!!

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So I'm definitely not very happy with how I originally wrote this story. I definitely need to work out some kinks, get more of a climax going to just absolutely blow you away!!! I will be working on this a little at a time for a long while. I hope to get the whole story up and added as a new rendition. I really would love to hear thoughts and views of anyone that may have an idea so I can twist it into my story to add better quality. Message or comment any opinions (and please, be nice and sincere about your opinions.) don't just tell my it sucks. Tell me how you think it could be better!!!

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⏰ Last updated: Jul 20, 2015 ⏰

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