Chapter 1

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Lucy : Noah Time for school
Noah : no mom
Lucy : Noah Chen
Noah : fine mom I'm getting up
Lucy : good *leaves the room
Noah *gets up brushes his teeth brushes his hair and gets dressed then heads out then leaves the bedroom grabs a apple and heads out to moms car opens it and mom drives off

Lucy *arrives at the school : be good
Noah : I will mom love you
Lucy : you too
Noah *leaves the car and runs inside he's late

*Lucy drives off and goes to the station

Lucy *goes inside the station
Tim : Lucy
Lucy : hey
Tim : how was Noah today
Lucy : he went to school alright
Tim : good
Lucy : you literally love my kid don't you
Tim : what can I say me and Noah get along
Lucy *laughs : shut up - Thorsen I'm ridding with you come on
Aaron : coming Lucy *runs to her
Tim *chuckles he remembers how hard he was on Lucy when she was a rookie

*with Lucy and Aaron

Lucy : so Aaron did you take my advice I gave you
Aaron : I did and I think your right I won't be going out with my past friends anymore
Lucy : do what you feel that's right Aaron

Nolan : 7 100 need back up
Aaron : copy that responding

*Lucy drove to the location : John what's going on
Nolan : one guy on foot and one guy in a black Mercedes
Lucy : Aaron you drive I'll go on foot where was he headed
Nolan : down town near cafe shop
Lucy *gets out and runs there to see a guy running : 7 100 male gun running in following him he's headed into north side street he's wearing black trousers and blue top
Car *hits her
Lucy *hits and goes unconscious
Nolan : detective Chen do you copy
Aaron : Lucy do you copy
*no response
Nolan *drives where Lucy was running see a girl on the floor unconscious gets out of the car runs towards her it's Lucy I kneel down I put my hand to see if she's breathing she's not : 7 100 I need ambulance to our location officer down I repeat detective Chen is down
Man : ambulance 2 minutes away
Nolan : Lucy stay with me come on stay with me
*Ambulance arrives
Bailey : John
Nolan : over here
Bailey : okay I'm gonna do CPR I need you to step back
Nolan *steps back
Bailey *does CPR *someone puts a mask over her and squeezes the back of it : doing it again *does CPR
Nolan : Lucy I need you to breathe think of Noah
Bailey : I have a pulse we need to get her to surgery right away now

*they got Lucy in the back of the ambulance John followed behind

*at hospital

Bailey : female car hit her wasn't breathing for a few minutes got a pulse
Grace : thanks get her to surgery make sure she doesn't have any injuries

*they did that takes her to the surgery

Tim *runs in the hospital : Nolan where is she
Nolan : surgery to make sure nothing isn't wrong she wasn't breathing then I said to her she needs to breathe thing of Noah then she was breathing
Tim : oh no what am l meant to tell him
Nolan : the truth
Tim : I need to find out first

*meanwhile with Lucy

Grace : code blue  we're losing her nothing is working we need to put her in a coma now
Nurse *does it
Grace : I'll inform the family and friends

*back in the waiting room

Angela , Aaron , Jackson , grey , harper turn up

Grace : anyone here to see Lucy Chen
Tim : yes we are
Grace : she wasn't breathing we tried everything
Tim : if she's dead
Grace : no she isn't we had to put her in a coma
Tim : oh my god
Angela *puts hands on Tim's back
Tim : you had no right
Grace : I did what was best
Tim : how do you suspect me to tell her 15 year old son that his mother is in a coma
Grace : I don't know I'm sorry
Tim *walks away
Angela : where are you going
Tim : to Noah's school

*Tim drives at Noah's school I head inside

Tim : hi I'm here to book Noah out I need to see him
Woman : sorry I'm not aloud your not on the list
Tim *shows badge
Woman : okay your name and why you here I have to say why your here
Tim : I'm Tim and personal problem with mom woman *puts speaker on - Noah Chen please report to Tim here to see you problem with your mother
Noah *puts backpack over his shoulders and run out the glass room to Tim : what's happened to my mom
Tim : come out here bud *they walk outside they sit on a bench
Noah : where's my mom
Tim : there was an incident your mom was chasing someone and a car hit her she wasn't breathing but then she was headed to the hospital the stopped breathing then the doctor told me they had to put your mom in a coma to help her breathe
Noah : no I can't lose my mom
Tim *puts hand on his cheek : I promise you you will not lose her ok
Noah *nods
Tim *grabs his head and hugs him : it's okay bud
Noah *cries into Tim's shoulder quietly

*hope you liked this chapter

*next one will be Noah visiting his mom will Lucy ever wake up or will something happen how will Noah take it will he lash out or push people away

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