I wanna redo Hermes.
I felt like I made Jorja too submissive and dumb. I never truly developed her to the point that Brynn and Jorja is a good match. It's like she's too naive and shit. I also want to change her name as well. Honestly, how I imagine Brynn would change as well, just certain aspects of her I want to change. I feel like I should keep her name though it's made the book what it is. Everything right now I just feel like changing to make it in sync. Also I want to change the title. I feel like it's eh it doesn't have that spark if you know what I mean. The book felt like it lost its spark.
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Hermes
RomanceShe is like a two for one special, or like Drake's double sided ablum Scorpion. She is loveable but with dark side.
