Story # 6: I'm a Vampire King and She's My Eternal Slave

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AUTHOR: whisperhello

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PLOT:

I love blood and i'm pretty ruthless when it comes to getting what i want. Hey! can you blame me? After all, i'm a vampire king and i'm used to getting what i want regardless of the consequences. My ruthless attitude has earned me a couple of enemies, including my brother. But bottom-line is, I kill when i want to and i kill whoever i want to. Friends are for the weak and love is for losers. Who would have thought that my slave would be the one to change me or will i be the one to kill her? Keep your friends close, but your enemies closer.

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OPINION:

First of all, yes, this Story is a Vampire Story. Like I said in the last Story (which is Rightfully His) that some readers just don’t give this type of Story a chance. Some are being very judgmental. So what if Twilight is a little bit crappy? (But I don’t really think like that. I have watched The Twilight Saga more than anyone can ever know and I have memorized the lines as well. Judge me now.) But that doesn’t means that every Vampire Story is made of shit as well. Well hey! If not thanks to Twilight there wouldn’t be Fifty Shades of Fuckedupness. No Christian Grey. Just imagine how sad would it have been. Okay back to MY OPINION about this very Story. How this was written is not perfect. That is the first that you should tolerate. But I think Author-nim is going to Edit it soon anyways. I know some are perfectionist (like me) but nobody is okay? Second, at the first Book, I think it happened to fast? Yeah. Somewhat like that. It has been so long since I have read this. If I remember it right just after a few Chapters they already hitch up to a couple but a lot of struggles had come. There’s a Book Two that is still not done yet but I am reading it. I told you. This is one of those Type of Vampire Stories that isn’t too crappy like the others. Some Stories are too scary and disgusting to read and bleh. I’m not supposed to be scared of Vampires. Anywho, this is a thumbs up just ignore the errors and you’ll be fine and you’ll understand this. I still think that this is a really sweet Story rather than a Vampire one. Like really. It’s just sooooo sweet. I hope you feel it too.

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RATING:

8.5 out of 10 (I was stuck between  8 or 9 because of the construction of the sentences but decide to put it between. When my favourite Vampire Story here in Wattpad finishes, I’ll post it as soon as it is. It’s the bang of all Vampire Stories I have read.)

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So... for the past five days, I think, Wattpad can't be open on mine. Idkw either so don't ask me. Anyway, there is going to be another two after this then... I'm done until another Story is done reading by me. Okay?

--> GenieStClair

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