Story # 14: The Bachelor

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AUTHOR: greenwriter

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PLOT:

One competition, one man, twenty-five women, and a bet. Zachary Astor wanted to be the Bachelor for one purpose alone: to prove to his friends that he can ditch twenty-five women without ever looking back at any of them. But will he stand on to his words when he meets Julianne Grey, the only woman who seems to regret being in the competition? Despite what he thinks, Zachary will find his thoughts preoccupied by the weird, silent, and mysterious girl he keeps on giving a rose much to his own amazement and her disappointment.

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OPINION:

Again. A Stroy I was so hook up I slept at four in the Morning just now. I found myself reading every single word the Author wrote because: One, the way she wrote in Third POV makes me feel jealous. It is super not boring or it always say the right words and if you DARE miss one you'll feel like you're going to be lost in the Story. Two, I haven't really watched or even glance at the TV Show The Bachelor all my life. I don't know how it works so... yeah. Lastly, just by reading the plot you'll get hook up. I've seen this somewhere before but like I said, I don't watch The Bachelor but I know the Show so I don't find it really good, at first. But only reading the first part and I could not put my phone down at all. If I let go, I found myself looking and then picking it up and read again. I mean, if this is how The Bachelor works then I might, just might actually watch it. But then again, not really fond of reality shows. And another, the perfection of it's writing. It's like I was given a gallon of Ice Cream, for me. Just  for me. I was giddy at how it was written. It's like, I don't know. It's like I was given a 5000 worth of gift cheque for me to feed on whatever I want and IT'S FREE! That is maybe why it didn't even took me a day to finish this. I don't really want to judge the girls that played a role on The Bachelor, I don't really know the show. But Zachary and Jules are one of the best examples of Real Love. I think Liam should went hard on Zach since he lost the bet. I thought at first he was going to announce on The Show that he was gay, for fun. I would have laughed. Liam went easy. In conclusion I love this more than the show itself because I don't really watch it. READ IT!

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RATING:

10 out 10 (Before I read the Epilogue I gave it a 9.8 but after reading the Epilogue I just gave it a straight ten. Really nice ending. One of those I didn't wish that was given a different kind of one. And to add the PERFECT WRITING, I can't give it a nine. I will feel like I did a crime. So yeah... 10! ^__^)

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So... after reading this I am going to start on The Transient Wife then right after finishing it I'll start on His Lovely Ward all of this Story are from the same Author. Read them as well! But I don't think I'll give them a review here. It depends. They are not exactly a Sequel or Part of The Bachelor right?

Last thing, I have three more Stories on Drafts that are being reviewed as of this moment. They're going to be there in case I can't read much anymore. School might start soon and I have work now so it always depends. My Grades are hangin' and I almost failed two of my classes last time. I don't want a repeat of that. So yeah... I might take College seriously now.

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