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Story # 38: Let Me In

AUTHOR: HaveFaith101

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PLOT:

Have you ever wondered what it is like for your life to take a 360 degree flip in the air. Yes a flip like what a cheerleader does? Well I think you've found the right story and no this story isn't about cheerleaders and preppy blondes, It's about an ex cheerleader who's life took so many flips that she landed stone hard on the floor... Did she get back up... Well yes, in a way she got back up but dropped back down again, this girl is Eleanor Smith...

Eleanor (Elle or Ellie) Smith's life was ruined at the age of 15, why you ask? She was raped. Now in her last year of high school, she is determined to make a better life for her and her son. It just so happens that with a new timetable means new classes and different people in her class.

When, arrogant, cocky rich boy Blake Marshall is paired with her in their science class he takes a liking to her and plans to win her over. However with Elle's troubled pass can she let Blake into her life and let him help her out? Or will stubborn Elle keep Blake in the dark... Join Blake and Elle in their story of love, heartbreak and high school life.

Copywrite © Dhana Goinden 2014

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OPINION:

 Hm. Well... it was an okay start. Actually, it was a bad start. I don't I'd be able to handle if it happened to me. It was such a big thing, especially at the talk of rape. It's suuch a big topic. But anyways, what happened to the female lead is no joke. What would you do if it happened to you? And to make it more complicated, you had a kid with the man who did it to you? I won't be able to handle it. It won't be the same of course. I don't want to put the blame on the kid but... it will be so hard. I just want to put it on my perspective. Enough of that, throughout the Story, there were moments that made my eye roll. I mean, after being raped of course you should be wary of people, men especially. But it didn't feel like that. I don't know. She felt too available despite everything. And the thing thatruined me is during the lower end. I could never handle that. I hope that it doesn't really happen in real life (I want you, yourself read it.). Towards the characters, I do admire the best friends. They are the real type of friends that people all should have. I was really happy that despite what happened, they were there for her. The Parents of the Female Lead... it's really disturbing. When the Mom believed the Man more than her own daughter. I love my Dad Dearly. He's the closest thing to my heart. I favour him more than my Mom I admit so... I'm a little sad that even if I don't want to believe it... there are Father's like him in the World. It's really sad. I think it's because of culture or in some sort but in mine, if the Father raped or even touched her daughter, the Mother would not hesitate to believe her daughter. But the justice system here is just.... stupid. Really poor and bad.  Blake and Ellie are just... people caught in both a bad situation. It's sucks that kids feel this type these days. I wish everyone could just live a normal, teenage lives. Like experience a normal childhood or teenage years. Everyone would want a normal life.

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RATING:

8 out of 10

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This is actually long over due so I am sorry to the Author but... here it is! The Internet is acuallt bull dog crap right now. I can't open anything. It's really bad but... here it is! ^__^!