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Story # 43: The Millionares Mistress

It might be weird. It has been 8 mos. Bear with me.

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AUTHOR: Maryonette

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PLOT:

Mary Georgia always felt like a strange spectacle ever since she was eight years old. With her notable disability, she has never wanted to stand out wherever she stood. Unfortunately, her eyes were the most alluring feature about her, and it always brought people closer than she ever wanted.

Struggling to make ends meet, Mary and her small family, in the slums of the metropolis, are finally given a glimmer of hope. Her older sister, Nellie, quickly comes across an opportunity that she couldn't take herself– but Mary could. Hesitant to work as a maid for a rich household, Mary had to swallow her pride and do whatever was necessary to help her family survive.

Once she was traveling to what would now be her second home, she is quick to take note of the beauty on the outside, however there was a completely opposite allure once stepping foot inside of the Vanderbilt estate. The woman that hired her, was very keen to welcome Mary into the secluded manor and she was quick to learn that the mansion belonged to only one man– Nathan Vanderbilt.

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REVIEW:

This is one of my favorites. Usually, I find Books with less conversations dragging. I don't really like stories that has more of a writer's perception and less actual conversation from the characters. I could imagine myself eye-rolling reading it. But this one, this one, oh gosh, I love it. I think I've read it four or five times and it feels like you're getting to know the Book, the character and the Story better each time. Just each time. I love the characters. It's just the perfect blend. And reading it actually makes me feel like I'm there. Behind the limelight but still there watching them told their stories to the camera or perhaps the author's. Whatever. But it's just too awesoom to think that you can envision yourself inside the story. It doesn't usually happen for me but when it does. It feels like heaven. A solace for the real world. A comfort, even for just the remainder of time. I want a sequel actually. I actually want to know what happen to Nathan and Mary - especially after they had their family and I am absolutely would be in heaven to hear Mary's voice. Imagining it in my head. I can feel the shiver, the anticipation. It sure would feel nice. I'm not saying anything! I may be just hinting it. :D

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RATING:

10 out of 10 (For originality, for its perfectionist in a not annoying way, for good visuals, for good story, for just being awesoom. Thumbs up!)

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AUTHORs NOTE:

It's been 8 mos. I'm sorry. Everything went crazy. I do continue to read but it's just too hard to sit down and write. Especially now. I'm in my last year in University. I just finished internship. I had just quit my job and I'm looking for a new one that actually fits me. I didn't have any vacation for myself for 2 years and now I feel like resting for as long until I find a job. So here is a treat. Hopefully, I'll be in the mood tomorrow to do another. I already have a line up of the stories I want to review. They're all good so you don't have to worry about it. I won't do what I did in the last one. People called me a bitch for that. I did say SORRY but I will stand my ground because I had enough of people who are popular for their SHITTY stories. It is kind of unfair for those authors who can't get their name out there. I am not an aspiring author. I have long since forgotten to try and sit down to write a full story. I have accepted it, so for those people who actually called me names so I can become popular and people will actually notice me or my future stories. I'm sorry to disappoint you. I know I should have done this a long time ago maybe 8 mos. ago, but it was the wrong time. And now I am explaining what had happened 8 mos. ago. I mean, I'm okay now considering it happened soooooo long ago. It didn't bother me at all.

Jouiey