Story # 9 & # 10: A Proscriptive Love and A Surreptitious Love

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AUTHOR: XxSkater2Girl16xX

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PLOTS:

A Proscriptive Love:

Holly's new, young teacher has a dark past, and a dangerous future. She soon finds herself charmed by his ways, and gets thrown into the chaos. Who knew having an ex-gangster for a teacher could be so troublesome? As Holly and Mr. Heywood grow closer, more questions about his past come upon Holly, as does danger. What is Mr. Heywood keeping from Holly? And why is it so bad? But most importantly, if she falls for him, could their relationship survive? After all... it would be a proscriptive relationship.

A Surreptitious Love:

Chris and Holly's relationship is finally perfect. With no gangs to harass them, the only thing they have to worry about it keeping their relationship a secret from the student body and faculity at school. Simple enough. However with the appearance of two new students, new troubles arise. The new girl isn't who she seems, but no one will believe Holly, and the new boy seems to enjoy causing Holly problems. Meanwhile Chris is finding it harder and harder to stay away from Holly in school. Keeping their relationship a secret suddenly becomes ten times harder. And to top it all off, Jeremy has a big surprise for every one.

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OPINION:

This is probably the most clean Student/Teacher Story I have ever read. I have read a few and it was ridiculous. Seriously. I mean it in an offending way because it really does sound it's a fake Story. But this one, can I say I almost cried? Seriously. I finish this (both of them) in the span of three days! It meant, whole day of reading (but ofc, I have to take shower. Eat. And take my medication) until three in the Morning? Hopefully that's the worst I did. I really love this! There are some Stories that after doing a Part Two, it gets boring. Now, I know or rather understand why some just don't do it. It's hard keeping the Story alive but Author-nim and this Story! Oh Ehm. Seriously. I have seen this Story a few times and you can laugh at me because "An Endless Serenade" has been in My Library for months now and I haven't read it until I found it it was the Third Part (sort of) but still... I had a crush on my Teacher when I was in High School but... nothing bloom. XD He was Married already and back then I was fat and really ugly. No kidding. This Story and the Author herself is pretty popular so I guess, it stands to say that this is one of my favourites? I think I'm going to like An Endless Serenade more I think. Haha. But still... it would be more awesome if you read EVERYTHING.

To add, I have FLIACS long, long way before. Earlier this year I added An Endless Serenade and a few days ago I added this both. And you wanna know what's ridiculous? I only found out yesterday that the Author of ALL that Stories is THE SAME. I'm fucking stupid. LoL.

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RATING:

9 out 10 (for the both of them. I hope Author-nim becomes popular and this would be Publish. A little clean up and this will be number one in Stores soon as well! Double thumbs up! ^__^ <333333)

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This was not really the original Story that was supposed to be added today. But I just love this sooooo much. I only finish it yesterday actually. :)

 PS: Wattpad fucked up on the day that I was supposed to post this. Fix your shit. Sooo not cool. Almost lost this.

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