I am truly sorry if people are not liking my story, I will try to improve.
I got some comments saying that I was adding too much romance and that I do not like Tanjiro. Or that I was trying to make Kanao and Nezuko look like cheap girls. I do like Tanjiro, he is a very good character and I love him. I do not try to make him guilty at every point and that was not my intention. Nor was I trying to portrait Nezuko and Kanao like that. I was trying to make the reactions look as cannon as possible from my side. I am really sorry if it felt like that.
Though I have deleted those comments now as I did not want them as a reminder of my failure to impress them as a writer, I am glad that they felt that I was actually at least worth telling my mistakes. But they did really effect me as it was actually my first story plus the fact that I am very insecure of myself and had put a lot of efforts in it so I felt very bad. And really nothing against to the people, who criticized the story, they were really an eye opener for me.
I will continue this story, though, as due to my fear of not writing as good as some expect, I can't deprive the other people, who actually are following my story to be disappointed. I will really try to improve on whatever they suggested me, though it will take a little time to edit. ( I am really really sorry if you guys felt that I was a bit rude to you. )
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Demon Slayer Cast Watch the Future
AdventureTanjiro, Zenitsu and Inosuke had just defeated the former lower moon 6. Zenitsu was crying and begging Shoichi to come along with them to protect him as the boy looked at him in disbelief. Inosuke was banging his head on the tree trunk again and aga...
