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Hey guys! I have a question to ask you guys reading:
Do you guys actually like the story cause I feel that you guys don't and I've gotten some good reviews from my friends at camp but not here from my few readers *lmfao emoji shooting itself* and I'm not sure if u should continue writing if no one likes it. If you like this then leave a comment and if you don't well tell me too so I can see if you guys do or don't mainly like it.
On with the story........

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"I know is hard for you. Its unfortunate that I got the job 15 minutes away and mike has to go 3 hours away." Jade's father responds.

"wow. This is a big decision." says mike.

"are you sure its a good idea?"Kelly asks.

"yes, I'm sure." answers Nate.

"well, I suppose its alright with us if its ok with Jade's father. And so long as you call us every day even if its for 30 seconds." says Kelly.

"please dad?" asks Jade.

"alright. Alright its fine with me."

"YES. Thankyou so much!" Nate and Jade say in unison.

Nate's parents and Jade's dad talk for a while about the finer details. While they leave the parents talk, jade and Nate go back to Jade's house and get his stuff set up for his new room.

"ill go make us a cup of hot chocolate while you finish unpacking." was stated by an overjoyed Jade.

"you're the best! Remember extra chocolate for me."

"I know!"

Jade comes back with two hot chocolates. She hands one to Nate and they drink it while unpacking. Just then Jade's father comes by the room.

"Mr. And Mrs.Johnson are here to see you."

"who's that?" Nate asked Jade and her father.

"um, Noah's parents."

Jade walks down the stairs to see Kate and Keith standing near the living room. They smile at jade and give her an awkward hug.

"its good to see you love."says Kate.

"how have you been?" asks Keith.

"I-I'm fine."

"who's this young man?" asks Kate.

"um that's Nate... Anyway, what brought you over here?"

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If you find any typos please comment on the paragraph and tell me so I can fix them please. Dont forget to vote and comment.
Love you ;)

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