Hey guys , i hope you're doing well . But I'm not . Really i'm very disappointed over the chapters . I know that some of are boring but soe of them are decent too . I'm really trying hard to write these chapters , ditching my work and writing over and over but i don't get the 10% of response i want .
I genuinely want to know where i got wrong . If you don't show me my mistakes how i would i know where i get wrong . i ask you guys over and over for suggestion , if you have anything in my mind i constantly asked you guys ...but no response . Let me tell you guys i had only three plots in my mind for this story . The sameer part and the wedding was never part of the story but it came along . I tried hard to fix things with new ideas and ...The response i expected was not good . At least you could tell me what was wrong .
Sometimes i feel like i'm blackmailing you guys for votes and comments . And you i really really feel bad and disappointed for it .
I get it that i dragged the story line . But i'm dragging Ajnabee too . I planned the confession scene back in chapter 30 now we are in the chapter 50 . I was supposed to finish the story in 50 chapters but we're not even halfway through the book . I know Ajnabee is a promising storyline ....but this one is too promising . i started writing kismat ka khel series first . That book ignited my love for writing . Ajnabee is just a part of it . And i really feel like now a days that having no response to this story is a disrespect towards the first book .
Not more than few loyal readers responses to the book . And some of you guys even stopped responding . do you know how my heart breaks with that ? All i'm saying is please react ...even if you don't like something express it ...i really want to know what you guys dislike and like so i will work accordingly .
I am taking a decision ......i am putting on hold on Ajnabee till this story is finished .
And Your response will decide that .
I'll remove the on hold if the comments on the both chapters increases
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Manzil ( kismat ka khel part -2) Completed
Fanfiction" aapki himmat kaise hui mujhe chod kar jane ki ... HAN ? AAPKI HIMMAT KAISE HUI " she gritted her teeth as she felt the seething anger coursed through her . she grabbed his collar and pulled him closer " wada kiya tha aapne ... wada kiya tha aapne...
