Hello my lovely readers it's your local newscaster/lemon man here with a question on how the hell you managed to read through this entire story without ripping your eyes about from how incoherent the grammar and story structure actually was!
It was a pleasure to write this when I was still incredibly young, and despite how much later I put the finishing touches on this, I still keep the original because it holds a special place in my heart, as I wrote this because I enjoyed Naruto and wanted to write something myself. However, it's occurred to me that no matter how much I want to keep it, I still need to accept its faults. And like I mentioned in the opener for this question, this grammar and structure are incoherent and the overall story is lost partway through the long blocks of text that aren't organized properly. Despite that, I still get a lot of votes and views on this story, so I was wondering to those of you who finish; how do you manage it?
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The Reincarnation of the Sage of Six Paths: A Naruto Fanfiction
FanfictionNaruto was running. The sound of a crowd of villagers and their feet pounding on the floor in a rush to catch him filled his ears. Their enraged screams told him all he needed to know about why they hated him. He eventually backed himself into an al...
