Plot ~ I love the art covers you made! Your plot is really interesting, but common. Your writing is smooth, but not complex. It's detailed enough, and keeps you hooked on what's going to happen next. Good Job.
Grammar ~ All the chapters I've read, I haven't seen any major grammar or spelling mistakes.
Hook ~ I used your first chapter for the hook. Honestly, what hooked me in was how relatable the main character, Hyunjin emotions were. As a woman who doesn't have the best relationship with one of her parents, and being an adult who still feels like she has to ask for permission to do certain things, is tiresome.
Plus, the line "You need to seek help, old man." Was quite funny.
Your writing is good too.
Description ~ The description is short and sweet. You could add more to it so that the reader gets a better idea of what your book is about.
Descriptive ~ Your story is very detailed. The dialogue, emotions, and art covers are lovely.
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𝐁𝐨𝐨𝐤 𝐑𝐞𝐯𝐢𝐞𝐰𝐬 𝐅𝐨𝐫 𝐔𝐧𝐝𝐢𝐬𝐜𝐨𝐯𝐞𝐫𝐞𝐝 𝐖𝐫𝐢𝐭𝐞𝐫𝐬 { Closed }
Short Story{ CLOSED! } This book was written to help undiscovered writers get discovered. It's a safe place to get your book reviewed and, hopefully, get help with whatever problems you're having. I am not the most experienced writer out there, but I don't min...
