Description ~ The description wasn't bad. Short and simple.
Hook ~ I used chapter one for the hook. I thought it was cute, and set the tone for the character's dynamic. By that I mean that clearly the two characters have this very tight-knit bond, which we soon find out why.
Plot ~ I do like your aesthetics! Very pretty. I do like how one of your main characters, Tessa, is struggling with issues that can be very relatable to the readers. Not to mention her being Albino, is not something common in stories.
Even though from what I've read and based on the description the plot seems to be similar to other plots, it's still is unique with how the characters interact, and appearance.
Grammar ~ I didn't see any major spelling or grammar mistakes.
Descriptive ~ Your book is detailed pretty well. Your vocabulary, and overall writing is smooth.
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𝐁𝐨𝐨𝐤 𝐑𝐞𝐯𝐢𝐞𝐰𝐬 𝐅𝐨𝐫 𝐔𝐧𝐝𝐢𝐬𝐜𝐨𝐯𝐞𝐫𝐞𝐝 𝐖𝐫𝐢𝐭𝐞𝐫𝐬 { Closed }
Short Story{ CLOSED! } This book was written to help undiscovered writers get discovered. It's a safe place to get your book reviewed and, hopefully, get help with whatever problems you're having. I am not the most experienced writer out there, but I don't min...
