Chapter 53

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This A.N is going to be in all three of my ongoing stories. So Harry Potter and the secret inheritance, Ember Potter and the secret of the gems, and Crystal Potter the half-ghost witch will all have the same A.N so if you read one of my other stories know you can just skip this bit.

So you all know I have spelling and grammar problems, well I asked something on Wattpad (Because that's for some reason the only site that has a community board, like seriously why doesn't AO3 at least have one of those, it would make asking your readers things so much easier!).

What I asked was if my readers would mind if I used ChatGPT to help with my spelling and grammar, I will not use it to write my stories for me. It'll just be there to help with my weaknesses like spelling.

Everyone on Wattpad said that as long as that's all I used it for, and it helped me then to go ahead so these chapters were corrected by ChatGPT. I went back and reread them side by side of the original text and all that was changed was spelling and some phrasing to better understand what's going on.

I wanted to let you know, because I'm going to be going back through my stories and using chat to correct the spelling and grammar errors in the past chapters.

 Adriane stayed behind the rock as she spied on the group. She quickly figured out that the two who killed her uncle and godfather were Saiyans. Seeing them, she remembered back to when everything first started, the strange black void where she could summon books about both the Saiyan race and Krypton.

She recalled reading that only a handful of Saiyans survived and began trying to figure out who these two were. Her eyes caught three new people joining the battle.

Her gaze was drawn to the tallest one.

This man was tall and muscular; he had clearly worked hard to achieve such muscles. Adriane could tell that they weren't for show, like some of the guys who went to the gym. This guy seemed genuinely strong.

He had a fair complexion with a few scars here and there. He was bald, which Adriane assumed was to avoid hair interfering with the third eye on his forehead.

She was shocked when she saw it. He couldn't be a Cyclops because they only had one eye, and he seemed to be a perfectly normal human. None of the people around him were making a big deal out of it either, so maybe it was a birth defect of some kind?

All three eyes had black irises, and the bottom two were almond-shaped. His eyebrows were thin and narrow, furrowed in anger at the two Saiyans.

He wore a green martial arts gi, similar to the one the short bald man had. He had a red sash as a belt and matching wristbands, and his boots were brown.

Her eyes turned to the other man.

He was shorter than the first man, with a different build, but it was clear he was a fighter. He was lean and fit; Adriane hoped he could fight.

He had a tan, likely from spending a lot of time in the sun. His face had a scar on his cheek, and his eyes were black and almost almond-shaped, just like the first man. He looked just as angry and serious as the others.

He wore a larger version of the outfit that the tiny bald man wore. Adriane felt a bit bad referring to him as the 'tiny bald man,' but she didn't know what else to call him since she didn't know the man's name.

Her eyes moved to the third new person, and her eyebrows raised.

This man was even shorter than the small bald man and the child. If it weren't for the fact that the man was moving around and flying through the air, she would have mistaken him for a doll.

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