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Gilliane Berry: The Ten Worst Ways to End a Book

Gillianeberry's blog has the awesomest gif-filled answer to how NOT to end your book. I really enjoyed it. Here is the gif-free article, but for the full enjoyment, I suggest going here:

http://www.thecreativepenn.com/2010/08/09/how-to-write-the-ending/The 

Ten Worst Ways to End a Book

We've all read books that end so perfectly we're left in states of total bliss. The story was so good we ache for more, but things were wrapped up so satisfyingly that we honestly know it's better this way.

Think of it like a fancy three course meal. The appetizer appetized. The entrée was rich, filling, and oh-so-delicious. And when dessert came, it was tasty, sweet and just the right size. You're full, but not so full your stomach might rupture.

And then there are the books that serve you sewage for dessert.

The ending is the last impression the reader is left with. You don't care if the first act dropped wonderfully tantalizing hints if the last act dumps a pile of crap on your plate. These are examples of the types of endings that leave a sour taste in the reader's mouth (to torture a metaphor even further). Ones to LOOK OUT FOR if you're a reader, and ones to avoid if you're a writer on Pain of Death.

1. The Everybody Dies Ending

I suppose some people find this one deeply literary or meaningful. I call it offensively manipulative and a total cop-out. It's a cheap and often pretentious ploy that only worked when Shakespeare did it, and even then I thought it was a bit much.He will grow up to write really depressing novels.

2. The Deus Ex Machina Ending

The bane of my existence. For those of you who don't know, deus ex machine is, to quote Wikipedia, "a plot device whereby a seemingly unsolvable problem is suddenly and abruptly solved with the contrived and unexpected intervention of some new event, character, ability, or object. It can be roughly translated as 'God made it happen,' with no further explanation, and, depending on usage, is primarily used to move the story forward when the writer has "painted himself into a corner" and sees no other way out".

Basically, the resolution does not come from the characters. It is not inherent in the story, set up from the beginning, arising from the painful development the main character has undergone. No. A great force pops out of the sky, waves a magic wand, and POOF! Things are all better! I'm looking at you, Aslan (aka the Deux ex Lion)

3. The Rainbows and Puppies Ending

This basically means that everybody lives happily ever after. To me, it's preferable to the Everybody Dies ending, only because it doesn't severely bum me out. But this chosen resolution is both immature an unrealistic. Life is messier than this. There are consequences even when you achieve your goals. I like when the author chooses not to tie up every thread with a pretty pink bow.

KEEP READING! There is Ryan Gosling after the jump.

4. The "Where the heck did that come from?!" Ending

The totally out-of-left-field, not set up, doesn't belong, holy-God-the-book-just-jumped-off-a-cliff ending. Sometimes these are AWESOME. Sometimes the twist ending is a brilliant development purely BECAUSE you didn't see it coming.

I had a writing teacher who liked to compare reading a book to buying a train ticket. Let's say you buy the ticket expecting a journey from Los Angeles to San Francisco. You don't care what track the author takes, as long as you are still heading up to San Fran. But sometimes the author can have a flash of brilliance and shoot you over to Las Vegas and you go, "WOW, Las Vegas is totally better than San Francisco and I don't miss San Fran at all!" Or you can arrive in Las Vegas and realize it is gaudy and the air is dry and you were really hoping for a stroll on Fisherman's Wharf (this post is brought to you by Tortured Metaphors!)Enough with the metaphors.

5. The Convenient Ending

"Oh crap, I'm in a completely impossible situation that I can't get out of. The bad guys are bearing down on me, trying to kill me, and I am utterly defenseless. Hey wait a second. What's this loaded gun doing here on the ground?! My, how convenient! I'll just shoot the bad guy dead and win the day!"It's terribly convenient how God just sucked the bad guy right out of my path."It's also terribly convenient that I was born with the innate ability to cause all mean people to break out in hives." Basically, the convenient coincidence gosh-that-was-lucky ending is BAD.

6. The Off-Tone Ending

The one that immediately comes to mind for me is Crime and Punishment (very long, very dour, full of murderous, religious Russians who worry about Jesus a LOT. Proceed with caution). It's obviously quite a thoughtful and melancholy book (there are no happy Russian novels). So why is that epilogue all full of hope? The main character is literally SPOILER SPOILER in a Siberian prison. He's spent the last million pages being all morose and kind of a drag. Yet now he's all smiley and thinking about his twue wuv incessantly. It doesn't fit.

7. The Way Too Soon Ending

This one's pretty self-evident. You're getting totally into the book, things are coming to a point, the stakes are higher than ever, there is SO MUCH TENSION... and that's where it ends. Things are unresolved. You have a case of literary blue balls.

8. The Way Too Long Ending

Things gets resolved, but then the action keeps going. The conflict is over, but still there are words on the page. This is toxic. This is the author's inability to exit the arena once the concert is over (METAPHORS!!). Authors get so in love with their characters and their worlds that it's understandable not to want to leave them. You know all the things that happen after the final plot point, and you want to show the reader. Sometimes we as readers don't want to leave either, and are willing to gobble up as many after-desserts as you're willing to offer. But enough is enough.Can we just move this along already?

9. The "It was all a dream!" Ending

This is the equivalent of saying "PSYCH! Those last 300 pages you just spent hours of your life paying attention to? Completely unimportant. The author has not only pulled the rug out from under you, he's pulled the whole house. You're actually on a boat.

This is the type of ending that makes me all CAPSY and cross and I end up throwing the book across the room (unless it's a Kindle, obviously, because that thing cost me $79).

10. The Meaningless Ending/ The Non-Ending

This is a combo of the ending that just sort of peters out into nothing, and the ending that happens, but doesn't actually mean anything. Either the characters haven't developed towards this ending, or this ending doesn't continue to affect them in anyway. It doesn't hit home the themes. It's the equivalent of being served flavorless pudding for dessert. Bleh.This is what how bad endings make me feel. Withered, hairless, and lacking a decent command of grammar.

And with that, I end my extended Metaphor Abuse and turn it over to you. What type of endings do you hate? What types do you love? Are there any points I made that you disagree with (rare, but it happens).