So... This one I wrote a while ago when my stepdad's grandmother died... I didn't really know her, but I heard a lot about her and it made me really depressed at the time... :'(
But yeah, I don't understand this poem at all, so don't ask me what's it about exactly or what anything was implying...
I don't usually follow patterns and writting schemes when it comes to petry because I can't even rhyme to save my life... Really, you don't wanna know how I potentially failed at having two hours to write a shakesperean sonnet in class for a final... *shudders* xD BUT with this one I sort of wrote only three words per line. I don't know why I did that, so don't ask me either. :) But yeah... here it is....
100 Years
"Along life."
She was crying
"A life that has
Surpassed us all."
The priest read
Thought the funeral
He was sad
Everyone was sad
"A hundred is
A big round
Number." Mother says
I wasn't sure
I understood her
"But why did
She have to
Go?" I asked
"She was old,
It was her
Time to walk
Thought the portals
and to heaven,
She will be
In peace now."
Mother replied in
A quiet whisper
"But after all
She has done?
Why does she
Have to be
punished for it?"
I said quite
Loud that the
People around us
Looked at me
"Death is not
A punishment, it
Is a reward.
She was lucky
to have lived
So long."Mother
Said with tears
In her eyes
Ad we turned
To walk home
"Grandmother was 99."
I said emotionlessly
Mother didn't reply
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My Life in the Abstract
PoetryThese are my poems which I have written over time. All of them meant something from sometime of my life and they all tell some sort of story. :) Please vote and comment telling me what you think. :) Thank you :D