Hey guys so I just noticed how many parts of the story are missing and it doesn't seem like there's much information in it and so I've decided to rewrite the story, changing it slightly.
There are certain points I want to clear.
1 ) I just want the story to make more sense and make it more believable.
So feel free to reread the story once more to understand it better.
2 ) I gave a few more explanations to the story adding twists here and there...
3 ) Furthermore in the future ill do A/N to give a brief description of the characters and where it's leading.
I hope you all understand.
4 ) The main plot of the story will still continue and the romance awaits. :)
5 ) For now, the story will remain as it is until I edit and change, where necessary, certain parts and I hope you'll still enjoy it.
6 ) Chapter one will be made longer and so are the others, I'll do more descripted writing in present tense.
7 ) I've been thinking about it and I've decided I'm not going to put a description as a chapter heading because it gives away too much.
I notice by how the title of the chapter tells more than what It's about so it'll be only:
Chapter One.
That's simpler.
8 ) Well since its always been Carrie's POV. I'm making it switch in times where needed. But that comes in the second part ;)
So that's the end of this and I hope we sorted things out. Thanks for always being patient and reading.
Enjoy!
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Romance"Will you do this for me, will you surrender?" A romantic story of Carrie Sitle. A girl full of wonders and mystery. She lives in her dark world, trapped and in need of help but with no signs of this, she continues her ordinary life. She doesn't be...