Thank you for reading this far! I wrote most of this story in four days, so I'm gearing up to do a second draft soon... with that in mind I wanted to ask your advice in the form of a multi choice questionnaire. You can reply with inline comments (even a lone exclamation mark will suffice).
(1) The main thing I will be working on in the second draft is EDITING... you would have noticed some really atrocious typos and punctuation in the last 23 chapters. But as far as the story goes would you wish to see more:
* Romance/chemistry/sex between Lucy and Daniello
* More of Lucy's dad
* More of Daniello's character... making him a little more attractive and a little less judgmental
* Other (please comment)
(2) To see if I have poked too much fun at Lucy OR if I have represented her character well (would hate a main character to be completely unlovable): Has this story inspired you to CONSIDER any of the following (other than not to read another book that I've written!):
* Environmental changes: Upcycling, recycling, less consumerism.
* Beauty changes: Dreadlocks, henna, sugar body scrub.
* Way of life: Living more sustainably etc...
*Other (please comment)
(3) What made you read this book:
* Cover
* Blurb
* The fact it was featured
* Other (please comment)
(4) Fun question to break up the boredom... who would you cast as these characters in the movie?
* Lucy
* Daniello
* Krishna
* Lucy's Dad
Once again THANK YOU for reading this story. Just a bit of background on it: Mills and Boon read it (imagine their faces!!!! hehehehehehe) they turned it down as they wanted Lucy to give up her dreads and become a lover of his lifestyle (celebrity parties, money etc...).
While I wanted to be able to write that ending, Lucy's character was so strong that my fingers couldn't type it.
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When the Bus Stopped
ChickLitWhen Lucy Falkwell loses control of her house bus on a lonely alpine road in New Zealand, she finds herself in the midst of opera-singer Alessandro Magno's latest music video. She mistakenly believes she's stumbled upon a horrific crime scene. Lucy...
