The world from my mind

Fanfics part four!

Hiii guys!! So yes you read the title right... the much acclaimed much loved fanfic series is back!! If you guys are new to this then this series is bassicly a rant about the things which I hate the most in one direction and 5sos fanfics... I would also like to state before hand that I have no intention of hurting anyone's sentiments by writing this... this Is just what I feel I don't like about the fanfics... it's personal preference so chillax.

NOTE - I have also written the first three parts in this series... so it would be better if you could read those two chapters before you read this one.... or you could read this one and then read the other three.

1) Now Mia, our beloved protagonist... who only wears yoga pants and oversized sweaters and only knows how to tie messy buns and has an unlimited amount of money is a bit of a sycopath.... she Is dissapointed that Zayn left the band.... soo dissapointed that she kidnapped him and his him in the basement if her house(mansion) and then she kidnapped the other four boys and put them in the same basement and then she made them sing personally for her... while she maniacally smiled with glee... and then all five of them magically fall In love with this physco.... and then they all dance to stolkhome syndrome togather (ironic)

My thoughts... I really have to give credit to the creativity and imagination put into this one... but.... seriously... practically how on earth can you kidnap five of the most famous people on this whole planet when they have the strictest security and hid them in you basement..... wow.... this girl įs amazing if she can pull of this... and then nobody seems to know that one direction is missing... no bodyguards no policemen nothing.... and then all five of them fall in love with her.... typical.

Luke is a rock star... he travels the world playing shows in arenas...he has millions of girls following his every move... he has paparazzi hot behind his trail.... he is living the life of luxury... mia is just an ordinary girl who goes to school and does everyday things like worrying about her hair and watching Netflix.... however she never brushes her teeth or eats food or bathes but you can always find her at Starbucks with a double shot caramel espresso with mint and honey, she also hates Luke Hemmings for no apparent reason... now what happens when there world's collide... after a devastating accident Luke is left severely injured near a club when Mia finds him... instead of taking him to the hospital she takes him to her twelve bedroom mansion where she stays with no body and then with no training in the medical industry she helps Luke recover from the accident.... but Luke has amnesia (ohh the irony) and he thinks that Mia is his wife.... and mia feels that the only way he could get heald was is she acted as his wife... could she be falling for the boy she had always hated?

My thoughts... why do the people who hate the boys always find them and end up magically falling in love with them! This annoys me sooo much! And why does Luke think that she is is wife.. I mean wife???.... and she claimed that he is a big rock star... why does no one care that he just dissapeared from the face of the earth??? And why didn't mia take him to the freaking hospital!!! Ahhhhhh

3) Louis was in a bad mood....' come to me mia' he said in a stern voice.... I was shivering... 'come now ' his voice was as sharp as the edge of a dagger... I got up and walked towards him... 'faster ' he snarled and I quickened my pace.... 'kneel down' he shouted... I did as he said and looked into his beautiful greenish blue orbs... he stretched out his hand and gave me a smart slap on my face. ' why did you do that? ' I yelped tears streaming down my face. ' I hit he because I love you' he said with that cute Doncaster accent. ' awwww I love you too babe! 'I said forgetting about the slap completely.

My toughts - why would someone slap you if they love you.... it makes absolutely no sense!! I have nothing to say about this.

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Heyyy guys!! I hoped you liked the chapter! Comment down below what you hate the most about these fanfics and if you like the chapter don't forget to vote! And thank you guys soo much for 3k reads!! Thanks soo much!!! See you later -saucegirl.