overdoing details

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I brushed my amazing, silky, blond, kinda-brownish hair with my new hairbrush I bought from the store beside the restaurant I ate in yesterday and tied it into a ponytail with my sparkly hair tie that my grandmother gave to me before she passed away. After that, I slammed the door of the bathroom really hard and I remembered that I bought them from Ikea two years ago and they might not be in good shape, so I should probably take care of that. Yikes.

Note: Avoid that. Don't aim for a huge word count that you know you aren't capable of writing because you'll end up putting unnecessary details.

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