PMV-comic Plans

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Here they are! I'm using The Valley. I know the final instrumental bits are longer than in the song, but I had to extend them a bit.

(lyrics are first, the scene is below them)

We were born in the valley, of the dead and the wicked
Sparrowkit, Flowerkit, and Sagekit at their mother, Thrushpelt's, belly in a hollowed oak tree. Eyes stare through the bushes outside the oak.

That our father's father found
A cat, Acorntail, watches through the bushes with an angry expression.

And where we laid him down
Acorntail attacking Thrushpelt and her looking shocked. The kits lay there, unprotected.

We were born in the shadow of the crimes of our fathers
Acorntail revealing Thrushpelt's body to the Clan, whom is revealed to be ThunderClan. He then drops the kits and declares he 'found' them.

Blood was our inheritance
Sparrowkit, Flowerkit, and Sagekit opening their eyes, to a queen named Froststep. Acorntail is standing over her and looking at the kits.

No, we did not ask for this
Thrushpelt's worried spirit appears, watching her kits and looking terrified and concerned. She has a bloody throat wound and is of StarClan.

Will you lead me?
Sparrowkit and his siblings chasing a leaf, which Sparrowkit is leaping to catch. Acorntail is watching with narrowed eyes and a bristled tail.

We were young when we heard you call our names in the silence
Sparrowkit and Sagekit seeing Thrushpelt's spirit, their eyes wide. They run up to her in excitment, though Flowerkit doesn't seem to notice as she watches a leaf.

Like a fire in the dark
Sparrowkit, Sagekit, and Flowerkit getting apprentice names. They all look excited, Acorntail watches them with Froststep beside him. Acorntail looks stern while Froststep is smiling with pride.

Like a sword upon our hearts
Flash-forwards of Sparrowpaw and his siblings all training, all while their mentors remain out of shot, and Acorntail is seen watching from the shadows. Thrushpelt's spirit watches.

We came down to the water, and we begged for forgiveness
Sparrowpaw and his siblings earning warrior names, while Acorntail and Thrushpelt watch from behind.

Shadows lurking close behind
Sparrowclaw and Sagetail find Froststep's body, with a few wounds and Deathberries lying beside her. Acorntail watches from behind, as always, though is concealed in shadow.

We were fleeing for our lives
Sparrowclaw and Sagetail turn, racing back to camp, leaving the body and Acorntail.

Will you lead me?
The two begging their leader, Redstar, to follow them, but he ignores their pleas.

*Instrumental*
Acorntail pads into camp, with Froststep's body. The Clan is shocked.

*Instrumental*
Flowerpelt rushes over to her 'mother', terrified. The Clan pads over to mourn.

*Instrumental*
Acorntail pads over to the angry Sparrowclaw and his terrified sister, Sparrowclaw unsheaths his claws and swips at Acorntail's face.

*Instrumental*
Redstar stares and snarls, tackling Sparrowclaw. Acorntail smirks and Sagetail stares in shock, shaking.

*Instrumental*
Sparrowclaw kicks Redstar off, looking scared, as he and Sagetail flee the camp, the Clan staring after them in utter shock.

*Instrumental*
Sparrowclaw and Sagetail cross the fallen log and disapear into the bushes, Thrushpelt's spirit beside the river looking concerned is the last panel.

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