So I don't know how much I like this chapter . . . I wrote it using the five senses to help progress my skills but I just didn't really know how to make it come out good. I would really appreciate it if you could give me your opinions and suggestions, good or bad. Anywho, I hope you enjoy, if anyone even reads these.
*General/Description*
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This was why I left the city, from the loud sickening sounds and smells to the softer more magical views of the mountains.
I had always wanted to go but my family always prevented me, and if it wasn't family it was work.
The sound of crunching snow beneath my feet urged me to dance and make my own song with the crickets and the wind as my choir.
It was so cold but the warm blush on my cheeks reminded me that I was really here. My nose was frozen but I could still smell that sharp scent that seemed to only hang in the cold winter air, blocking every other smell and clinging to my airways.
I smiled, my eyes lighting up as I glanced towards the towering mountains ahead of me, trees bordering my path. The soft blue hues accentuated by the colourful cosmos amazed me to no end.
The purples and greens and pinks of the northern lights danced above, welcoming me to this hidden magical wonderland.
My jacket hugged me and it felt heavenly on my body. I tucked my cold hands into my pockets and allowed the warmth to envelope me.
The taste of my breath and the winter air mixing together made me smile and I breathed out a frosty cloud of breath and watched it weaves its way about until it disappeared.
Yes I was so glad I could finally make it out here.
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So it was horrible, I know. Anywho I hope it was bearable despite the fact that I'm not satisfied.
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Thoughts Left Behind
General FictionA compilation of short stories in a variety of different genres. (Sorry this is such a terrible description, there was no way to put it without it sounding really stupid.)
