Muwahahahha, I left you at a cliff hanger! I am going to be doing flashbacks and changing the point of view of the character sometimes, and I'm going to start now. Hope you like it so far..... I know you don't.
Chapter 2 (flashback)
2 Months Earlier
Dear Diary,
Life is miserable. I can't take it! I think I'm going to skip school again. I miss my older brother, without him everyone makes fun of me. Without him, I'm not included in anything! Just because he was the quarterback on the football team and the most popular kid in the school, people went along with me being present. Now, they don't care. So I sit here with that shiny knife calling my name. My parents don't seem to care, all they do is argue. Nothing new, there downstairs right now flipping out. Well, I'm going now. Whoever finds this, I give up. If you truly love me you will find me....
Sincerely, Flabby Abby. :'(
POV - Abby's Mom(Brianna/Bri)
"You know what, FUCK YOU! What do you care? You don't take any consideration of me or our children! Why do you think your own son is dead? Huh? ANSWER MY QUESTION? Get out of here! I don't want to see you ever again!"
*door slams shut* *Bri sighs and slams here fists at the marble table*
"Abster honey, can you come down here? Abby?" She must be asleep, I'll go up there in a bit to make sure the lights are off. *tv goes on* If you look outside its about 54 degrees Fahrenheit. Perfect for a Thursday night football game...
*Two hours later*
Why is it so cold in this house? It feels like it's coming from upstairs. Really, Abby fell asleep with her lights on, and window open! "Abby, how many times have I told you to turn your lights off, and why is the window open? Abby?" She left he diary out too! You have become so careless. *reads diary* *gasp* Abbys gone!
"C'mon Dan answer your phone!" You have reached Daniel Tucker, I can't reach the phone right now. Please leave a message. Bye. "Answer you phone for once Daniel! OUR DAUGHTER HAS RAN AWAY!!!!!!!! Come home, or I'll find you!"
"Yes, 911, my daughter has ran away. Mhhm. Okay. Please hurry!"
POV- Abby Tucker
It's chilly out tonight. Where am I going to go? No one likes me, and I can't just show up at someones house. Maybe I can go to my happy place, the lake. The flowers are at full bloom, and the full moon tonight should have an amazing reflection off the water. Tall grass' hide the devious eyes of cars. Insects are in the middle of there every night party. The sound of the wind is my brother talking to me. I'll sleep here for the night until the killing yellow ball comes from the East.
"I'm sorry, that was all my fault. Wait. I haven't seen you around. Is this your first day here?"
"It's fine I-I-I mean okay, and yeah I just came from Io- I mean my name is Ab-b-b-by."
He was gorgeous. His long, sandy blonde hair fell in his face, and he pushed it back. The voice coming from this priceless creature was not low nor high pitched. It was just right, and smooth sounding. His eyes were a glossy hazel, glistening in the light of some crowded school. I just want to hug him, and tell him everything.
"Nice to meet you, I'm-
"- Abby wake up! Abby!!!" I heard a voice that sounded familiar.
I opened my eyes, it was pitch black. Where was I? My ears came into focus, the prrr of a car was nearby. Blinding LED lights brought me back to life. Then I remembered it all. My parents, and a couple other people found me. I had ran away from society, hoping not to be found. I was then took home.
The next day I woke up in my own bed. Wobbling down the stairs my parents were waiting for me. I glanced at the clock, waiting to be scolded and sent back to a hell whole they called school. But no, my father started talking in a calm voice. He said he and mother have had a talk, and we were moving. He told a whole story to go with it, without even mentioning me running away. He admitted he was a jerk, and none of this was going to happen again. They were starting over with new everything! Mother just nodded with a huge smile.
What do you think of the point of views, and the first flashback? So far this is the best chapter. BTW I have terrible internet, that's why this is just getting updated. I'm writting it in WordPad, so I don't need internet. Then you can enjoy chapters faster when the internet does work!! Yay!
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Present Is Past (Not Edited)
Teen FictionThis is a story that tells of a girl, Abby Tucker. In her past she gets bullied and picked on, ever since her brother died. After she tries to escape society, her parents realize how terrible her life is. They all decide to leave Iowa to go to Color...