I do not own Harry Potter or this fanfic! Harry Potter belongs to J.K. Rowling. Also, PG13 because of swearing, smoking, doing drugs, cutting and bad sex scenes.
AN: Special fangz (get it, coz Im goffik) 2 my gf (ew not in that way) raven, bloodytearz666 4 helpin me wif da story and spelling. U rok! Justin ur da luv of my deprzzing life u rok 2! MCR ROX!
The spelling! My eyes! Did Raven really help you, or did you make that up? Maybe Raven's her imaginary friend?
Also, what's "ew" about a girl having a girlfriend in "that way"? You're ew! Sorry, I'm just easily offended.
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Hi my name is Ebony Dark'ness Dementia Raven Way
That's a Mary Sue name.
and I have long ebony black hair (that's how I got my name) with purple streaks and red tips that reaches my mid-back and icy blue eyes like limpid tears and a lot of people tell me I look like Amy Lee
Her appearance is Mary Sue-ish as well.
Also, this is Amy Lee. A big difference between the two is that Amy Lee is fucking gorgeous, whereas Ebony sounds like one of the kids that always smoke in front of my school during breaks.
(AN: if u don't know who she is get da hell out of here!).
Wish I could, sweetheart.
[[I'm not related to Gerard Way but I wish I was because he's a major fucking hottie.
Somebody here has a celebrity crush! Ebony must also not know that it's wrong to date family.
I'm a vampire but my teeth are straight and white. I have pale white skin. I'm also a witch, and I go to a magic school called Hogwarts in England
No. No... She's going to ruin Harry Potter!
And isn't Hogwarts in Scotland?
where I'm in the seventh year (I'm seventeen). I'm a goth (in case you couldn't tell)
No shit Sherlock.
and I wear mostly black. I love Hot Topic and I buy all my clothes from there.
So, that's her OC, or rather, her NO-C.
For example today I was wearing a black corset with matching lace around it and a black leather miniskirt, pink fishnets and black combat boots. I was wearing black lipstick, white foundation, black eyeliner and red eye shadow.
Nobody is interested in what you're wearing.
I was walking outside Hogwarts. It was snowing and raining so there was no sun, which I was very happy about. A lot of preps stared at me.
I already like the preps.
I put up my middle finger at them.
"Hey Ebony!" shouted a voice. I looked up. It was.... Draco Malfoy!
"What's up Draco?" I asked.
"Nothing." he said shyly.
Draco is not shy. Also, what a meaningful conversation!
But then, I heard my friends call me and I had to go away.
This thing has friends?! There's more of her?!
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AN: IS it good? PLZ tell me fangz!
Please put your "fangz" through my throat and kill me now.
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My Immortal with Commentary
FanfictionMy thoughts when I was reading the infamous bad fanfic "My Immortal" by Tara Gilesbie.