My Immortal with Commentary

Chapter 38.

AN: wut doez every1 fink if I end da strory and den I add sum more 2 it after vocation? oh yah asnd prepz stup flaming if u dnot lik dat story den take muh quiz ok den u wil c if ur gofik or not!1111111

AN: What does everyone think if I end the story and then I add some more to it after vacation? Oh yeah, and preps, stop flaming. If you don't like the story then take my quiz, okay? Then you will see if you're goffik or not!

Can you also end the story and don't add more to it? Also, I took some online quizzes and they all said I'm a goff, except the 'What My Immortal Character are you?' quizzes, those said I'm most like Britney and Dumblydore, a prep and a posr. I still consider myself a prep, though.

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Satan and I walked 2 his car. It wuz a blak car wif pentagrams all over it. On da license plate said 666 just lik Draco's car. I went in it seduktivly. Stan started 2 drive it. We talked about Satanism (lolz he wuz named after Satan), kuttting, musik and being goffik.

He was named after Satan? No shit, Sherlock! And I totally picture their conversation going a bit like this:

"lolz, I lik GC and MCR 2."

"I liek to kut myself."

"Yas, i kut maself to. But i dont hav scars cuz im a vrompire!"

And this is a hundred times funnier to me, seeing as kut means pussy in my language.

"Oh my satan, Gerard is so fuking hot!11" Volxemort agreed as we smoked sum weed. (koz bi guyz r hot dey r so sensitive I luv dem lol goez fux a bi guy)

Once again, way to stereotype bisexual guys.

"Lol, I totally decided not 2 comit suicide when I herd Hilena." I said in a flirty voice. "..........Hey Satan do u know da cure 4 when ppl r adikted 2 Volxemortseruem?"

Because suicide is a topic that is to be discussed in a flirty manner. Please, I've read enough books from authors that romanticize self-harming and suicidal thoughts. And I, for one, am sick of it. This book isn't romanticizing it as bad as some other books I've read, but when people write about a girl who self-harms who falls in love with a boy and then all of her issues have magically disappeared like snow before the sun, that angers me so much. It makes the problem seem invalid and as it makes it seem as if people who self-harm are just doing it for attention, which is not true.

Sorry for the little rant there, I got a little carried away.

"Well.................." he thought. "I fink u have 2 drink Vampire blod."

Does that mean that Professor Sinister has to drink Ebony's blood? I want to read that. I want to read about Ebony suffering.

Suddenly Volxemort parked da car behind a blak movie theater. Satan and I walked outside. We went in2 da movie tether were they were showing da Excercist. In it a boy and a gurl were doing it sudenly a cereal killer came lol. Satan and I laughed at da blood koz we're sadists.

Don't you fucking dare touch my breakfast. I will kill you. My Coco Pops are the reason I wake up in the morning.

While Satan was watching da movie, I had an idea. I took Satan's gothic blak Nightmare b4 Christmas cigar sexily from his poket and put sum Amnesia potion in it. I put it bak in his blak Emile the Strange bag. Satan turned arund and started 2 smoke it. Blak cloudz wif red pentagramz ind em started 2 fly around everywhere.